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Soup Is Down

Today my life went into apathy condition
Out of the window it went,my poetry nutrition

Not being able to log in,the Soup is down
Now,all I have left is sitting here like a clown

Because several atempts later,still not getting my log in bingo..
I finally lost it,my computer and desk came flying out my attic window

Written by: Arild Ertsland
                 4th.February 2012

Contest: Life Without the Soup by David Williams

Please note me if its wrong,its my first go in a contest.

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  1. Date: 2/11/2012 8:05:00 PM
    I still like how you did yours better than mine. hahaha. Such a cool ending yours has.

  1. Date: 2/11/2012 1:59:00 PM
    This is so funny Arlid! I can just picture it-LOL! The bingo part is great-ha! Have a great weekend-thanks for your nice comments :)

  1. Date: 2/11/2012 10:41:00 AM
    hahaha, well yeah, It sucks when Soup is down. Fascinating way to express it, Arild. Well penned. Dinda :)

  1. Date: 2/11/2012 4:50:00 AM
    Love the imagery and your humor. I have just joined Poetry Soup, and am quickly becoming addicted - so your poem already was meaningful to me. Thank you for commenting on my poem!

  1. Date: 2/9/2012 10:59:00 PM
    hahahaha, I LOVE IT. That last line was so awesome, and I am sure DAvid will like it. If not, I will be unhappy about that!!!

  1. Date: 2/8/2012 6:39:00 PM
    Haha. Very fine write. Everything happens for a purpose. And the purpose here: to iunspire you to write what I would consider a masterpiece! Fweeee!~~~~~~~~~~~~` dA~ Always, Laura

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 12:32:00 PM
    Had to smile while reading this Arild.. All the best for David's contest ;) Congratulations on your PM membership as well ;) tc Wilma

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 4:32:00 AM
    Oh dear I thought it be true- Oh no I thought- not again- not another poetry site disaster- words lost to the abyss-a black hole! But alas it was just your stupendous write for what could be- without soup- I am so glad it wasn't for real- phew-loved it Arild, : ) lol Brenda

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    Date: 2/7/2012 12:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ..thought it was for real too,when I saw the title over at David`s blog.! My hands are still trembling,lol
  1. Date: 2/6/2012 4:51:00 AM
    awesome, Arild. can feel your frustration in every word, i think David will like this. harry

  1. Date: 2/6/2012 12:51:00 AM
    You say it so well there Arild, all the best in the comp xx

  1. Date: 2/5/2012 7:18:00 PM always leave the nicest comments...thanks !!... Now to the poem: I think you did a good job here. I sure would miss the soup should it go down. Picturing desk and laptop flying out the window !! lol Best of luck in the contest !!!

  1. Date: 2/5/2012 10:26:00 AM
    i can imagine the feeling, arild... so well done, bingo!.. you win!.:) huggs!

  1. Date: 2/4/2012 5:38:00 PM
    Great entry for contest Arild, good luck, best wishes. Elizabeth

  1. Date: 2/4/2012 4:35:00 PM
    Arild, you wrote this one very well. The way this is written, anyone with knowledge of English can comprehend it easily.

  1. Date: 2/4/2012 4:22:00 PM
    Well done Arild,good luck in the contest. - oxox love Anne-Lise