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Not winter blowing cold, not the frost kind His Army jacket bearing a promise; Like token draped on shoulders he will miss That from anticipated distance, we find, One kiss to quell a thirsting quite refined With gentle rush to dance, to care, and tease. Yet love must express, his will, to say this, How treasured you are and always enshrined. So come, dear one, let’s trail the endless strands Before I go to war holding your dew Yonder the waiting grass, near iced trees’ nest Our vows entwined along the New Year sands, Return I will as faithful groom, renewed Yes, only then shall we feel wholly blessed! Leather Jacket Contest of Giorgo V. by nette onclaud

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  1. Date: 7/4/2013 5:37:00 AM
    How do you spell L O V E L Y

  1. Date: 7/4/2013 12:14:00 AM
    "tremendously awesome........... congrats!!! SKAT"

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 5:45:00 AM
    I don't know what to say other than, WOW! Amazing! Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 3:24:00 PM
    Nette a fabulous dedication to the solders. Congratulations on your outstanding win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 6/26/2013 7:38:00 AM
    wonderful hopeful story line! I wasn't sure if we could use any jacket, not just the leather one GLAD you were brave & did. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 6/26/2013 12:27:00 AM
    Beautiful Indeed :) Congrats on the win

  1. Date: 6/6/2013 11:46:00 PM
    Very beautiful, enjoyed this one!!

  1. Date: 6/5/2013 6:20:00 AM
    This was a beautiful poem Nette.. I really enjoyed reading it. Have a great day and hope all is well with you cory

  1. Date: 6/4/2013 4:38:00 PM
    A melodic song of a devoted heart exulting love and beloved, marvelously expressed! Thank you!

  1. Date: 6/4/2013 9:16:00 AM
    Dedication with love to soldier wishing him return back to renew the blessed life. Lovely done my friend. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 6/3/2013 10:46:00 PM
    Weighty like a poem from the days of yore, with your delicate touch, great, nette!!

  1. Date: 6/3/2013 9:32:00 PM
    :D This one is special to me for two reasons. First, it is an excellent write, lush, full of imagery, and Second, because my Gran was a warbride, this story-po holds so much meaning... longing, fear, hope.... waiting grass, indeed, the waiting... hugs hon!

  1. Date: 6/3/2013 8:55:00 PM
    Hello ate Nette. Tanong tanong. Maliban sa pag share ng poems anu pa ang gamit ng PoetrySoup sau? saken eh paghanap ng gf. hahahahah joke. pampallipas oras lg kase dameng blocked sites d2 sa call center. e2 nlg naisip ko na site

  1. Date: 6/3/2013 8:31:00 PM
    Very passionate write Nette, so powerful when love has to wait, nothing more scintillating then the blessed reunion, I've enjoyed your verse tonight, blessed be xxx

  1. Date: 6/3/2013 5:34:00 PM
    yours is very romantic and I like the simple elegant feel to this, Nette.

  1. Date: 6/3/2013 3:29:00 PM
    Another stunning & emotionally heartfelt writing. Wholly blessed, indeed.

  1. Date: 6/3/2013 1:55:00 PM
    This is a tenderly enshrined glorious write my friend! I really loved reading this dynamically perfected poem this afternoon! You have written a patriotic piece of love, one filled with awe, a grandiose poem Nette! Great Work!!