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So Far Away

Tomorrow's time will carry the day,
A faster pace, an easier way.
Moments close upon my mind,
My deepest thoughts are hard to find.

To create in the absence of your love
Is to set to flight a wingless dove.
To be without you leaves me blind,
My deepest thoughts are harder to find.

Expression finds a difficult road,
The burden is too heavy a load,
Remembering all I've left behind,
Recalling all those precious times.

A narrow stream meanders it's course
Traveling far from its' original source.
So easy we fall prey to our minds,
My deepest thoughts are hardest to find.

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  1. Date: 4/9/2014 10:20:00 AM
    Enjoyed the write on Many Miles Away theme, congrats on a fine win,craig

  1. Date: 4/7/2014 9:10:00 PM
    Craig, I felt your words.. I thought this poem was just amazing effective.. Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 4/7/2014 6:36:00 PM
    congratulations on a well deserved win, memories are sometimes hard to pin down

  1. Date: 4/7/2014 6:31:00 PM
    Lovely and superb write,Pal..Congrats on your win in this contest...well deserved,...

  1. Date: 4/7/2014 5:58:00 PM
    CRAIG, Congratulations, a wonderful win. Thank you for sharing how far your distance goes. ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 4/7/2014 9:47:00 AM
    Congratulations Craig, A well deserved win my friend.......Roger

  1. Date: 5/15/2013 4:59:00 PM
    WOW the post note rivaled your poem in beauty! Lovely write, Craig. Beautiful. Thanks for your post on my poems.

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 12:11:00 AM
    "The irregular pattern (due to the 3rd stanza) threw the poem off a bit for me (...hard, ...harder, ......., ...hardest). Congratulations on your third place win with this lovely VALENTINE, Craig, and sharing this trip down memory lane with us.Love, Su" I did not appreciate your letter to me accusing me of having a chip on my shoulder. I may be new here ( as you state in your letter), but I judge without knowing the entrant's name. It is a valid comment I had made and no one can accuse me otherwise. Seeing as the contest was about secret messages, coded script, discernable patterns in the poem, etc, the nonconformity of the 3rd stanza, warranted my comment. Su

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 4:19:00 PM
    Beautiful Craig!! I know she must cherrish it deeply. Well done and congrats on your win!!! Big hugs. Deb

  1. Date: 1/27/2013 5:56:00 AM
    Well done Craig .... Seren .......

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 11:18:00 PM
    Congratulations for a very creative and lovely Valentines Poem and awesome win my dear friend, Craig! Thanks for sharing it, too! love/hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 10:17:00 PM
    A beautiful love letter for your Valentine Craig, and a wonderful winning entry. Congratulations! Y

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 4:51:00 PM
    Craig... congratulations in Suzette's sweet sweet " VALENTINE" contest. Always & forever * LINDA

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 2:17:00 PM
    Congratulations on your fine win, Craig. This is beautiful! Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 10:45:00 AM
    Congrad's on your win in this contest, it wasn't an easy challenge! Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 8:52:00 AM
    Great trip down your memory lane. You have been writing a long time. That explains why you are such a skillful articulate writer. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 6:59:00 AM
    congrats on your win Craig

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 5:49:00 AM
    The irregular pattern (due to the 3rd stanza) threw the poem off a bit for me (...hard, ...harder, ......., ...hardest). Congratulations on your third place win with this lovely VALENTINE, Craig, and sharing this trip down memory lane with us. Love, Su

  1. Date: 9/13/2012 10:09:00 PM
    what an interesting one you penned here. I love that repeating line, the great title of your poem!

  1. Date: 9/13/2012 10:28:00 AM
    wonderfully written poem friend Craig :) have a blessed day always! hugs!! **Maria**