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Snow Storming Us

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Snow Storming Us

Sky greyed with sudden snow, cars slithered serpentine roads -
a screech-slide of tyres on obsidian ice. Traffic slowed;

indicators blinking against the driving white squall,
engines' hot oiled throats throttled to standstill.

Bitter winds whipped us raw; ice shrapnel's rip and tear
piercing our lungs. Snatching gasps of spiked air,

our stung skin numb from the blizzard's bite.
Tempestuous snow smothered hematite night;

gusting and mounding, turning black to white.
By dawn, drifts dazzled with diamante light;

air was achromatic, blanketed fields blanked,
hills bleached to silence; the landscape blanched.

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  1. Date: 1/4/2012 10:27:00 AM
    This write is making me shiver here Charlotte you've out blanched many blotting paper white vistas more than iv'e imagined..) and i tell you that's "all white by me".....

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  1. Date: 11/28/2011 8:30:00 PM
    we had our first snow today ligght though it was it was still snow. it will be gone by tomarrow for God wills it so. i will work everyday for God wills it so. and i ll tell you why at the end of the week. love john oxoxoxoxox

    Puddifoot Avatar Charlotte Jade Puddifoot
    Date: 11/29/2011 2:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    but you'll only tell me if God wills it so
  1. Date: 11/26/2011 11:53:00 AM
    This is such a gripping depiction of a snow storm, Charlotte! You really made me feel like i was experiencing's you definitely have this wonderful grasp of vivid images. I always enjoy your poems :D thank you very much for your wonderful thoughts in my note the other day :D

  1. Date: 11/22/2011 12:38:00 AM
    wow, Charlotte, that is a splendid title for a splendid poem. One of my favorites in this contest! Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 11/21/2011 7:07:00 PM
    now THIS is why I'm glad I live in Florida today. Amazing write, Charlotte, wow! Thanks ~N

  1. Date: 11/21/2011 6:18:00 PM
    A brilliant flow of words and images, enjoyed reading, all the best