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Snoring

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Snoring

Snoring snoring snoring snoring
Tossing and turning and wide awake
Sound I hear my soul lies shaking
Ears are humming, life at stake

Snoring snoring every night
My mind keeps thinking how to stop
Can i set things back to right
Before my brain decides to pop

A voice I hear inside my head
Her snoring causes me such dread
A buzz saw slicing my heart red
The voice will save me from being dead

A pillow will make it go away
Lingering voice is very right
Think of sleep to come your way
When silence comes to you this night

I take my pillow and quietly stand
And cover a struggle then ensues
Thrashing kicking beat like a band
Now quiet peace my life renews

Looking upon her lifeless eyes
Kissing cold lips and saying good night
Laying in bed I give a big sigh
Quiet at last, and now sleep tight

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  1. Date: 8/10/2013 9:41:00 PM
    Congrats and Well done. :)

  1. Date: 6/12/2013 10:04:00 AM
    Oh yikes-- well this is a good reminder to not snore in case of a sleepover! Very nice write, Rick-- enjoyed this one! Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 6/11/2013 5:09:00 PM
    I was afraid of where this baby was going, Rick and I was right!...This reminds me a little of 'The Telltale Heart' by Edgar Allen Poe...VERY unique twist on the contest....Congratulations are definitely in order - Tim

  1. Date: 6/11/2013 10:50:00 AM
    Good one Rick!! Congrats

  1. Date: 6/11/2013 7:52:00 AM
    Hi Rick, You have chosen a great topic for your poem many people in ther world are snorers and it has been known to break up marriages, I am one of these snoring people so it hits home with me, great poem. John

  1. Date: 6/10/2013 7:06:00 PM
    I'm sure there are spouses who threaten to do just that!!!! Congrats to you on your clever twist to Roy's challenge!

  1. Date: 6/10/2013 2:07:00 PM
    congrats in Roy's contest............. SKAT

  1. Date: 6/10/2013 1:26:00 PM
    wow glad not to be next to you lol , congratulations Rick xx

  1. Date: 6/10/2013 12:56:00 PM
    Congratulations on the win. I'll be posting a blog with additional comments. Cheers, Roy

  1. Date: 6/6/2013 11:57:00 AM
    Thanks, Rick. I now have something to show my wife of 58 years. It may cut down on her snoring.... Great write... Jake

  1. Date: 5/28/2013 10:18:00 AM
    A poem one can relate. Very well written. Well done Rick. AO

  1. Date: 5/27/2013 1:40:00 PM
    I love the casual darkness. A great and unexpected crescendo. The ending verses were like a hook. A sharp one. I love a good hook.

  1. Date: 5/27/2013 6:36:00 AM
    Rick, wow, a scary thought. I'm happy I don't snore or I don't think I do. Insomnia can, can cause fearful actions. I wouldn't want to be your bed partner. You've provoked many thoughts for the reader. But isn't that what poetry suppose to do? Warm Trembling, Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 5/27/2013 6:12:00 AM
    Wow, that is quite the fearful write my friend! Your poem brings me chills with the terror the person brings to his wife (or girlfriend), such thoughtlessness and cold feelings of horror he brings! I love the scariness that you bring to the limelight, is this for the contest? I believe you would do quite well in this contest! What a tremendous piece, Great Work!!