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Smiling snow

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Smiling snow

on my way
for my morning walk
today’s treat
a street and pavement
covered  with snow

for me
a break for a while
something comes  my way
while passing by

I watch Buddha
in his little garden
sitting in the corner
on the edge of his square pond

a thought crosses my mind
I really try
but I can not remember
the day  he wasn't there

made out of grey stone
covered with snow
sharing  his presence
he doesn't talk
he looks small
he tells so much
his is so great 

HE showed a miracle
he made the snow smile
all over his face

©Ellie Daphne van Stralen 

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  1. Date: 1/27/2014 3:46:00 PM
    enchanting poem Elly I love it Shadow x smile hug

    Wouterse Avatar Elly Wouterse
    Date: 1/28/2014 2:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    TY Shawod for taking the to time to read and comment my poem. I wrote this one last year.. your comment brought back such nice memories.. the dog I walk with we had to put down just a week before his 'meant to be' play-mate would 'enter' our 'premises" (a home is more than just a home...) Dutch greetings Elly
  1. Date: 12/7/2012 8:31:00 PM
    Had to read this one one more time!...You are a budding new talent...keep at it!...I have replied to your very kind soup mail - Tim

    Wouterse Avatar Elly Wouterse
    Date: 12/8/2012 11:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Great! For you AND for me!!!! :+) Ellie Daphne
  1. Date: 12/7/2012 5:41:00 AM
    Ahh...Buddha made the snow smile...what a gem this poem is! - Tim

    Wouterse Avatar Elly Wouterse
    Date: 12/7/2012 5:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    What a gem of a comment!!!!!!!!! TY so much for taking the time to read my poem and comment WITH content. TY so very much. :+) Ellie Daphne
  1. Date: 12/6/2012 9:38:00 PM
    this is a charming DELIGHT to see. I love when a poet takes a simple object and just writes about it in such an eloquent manner, especially the last part how you say he made the snow smile. A FAVE upon this one!!!

    Wouterse Avatar Elly Wouterse
    Date: 12/6/2012 11:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    While the snow is falling here NOW(not as usual this early in the winter) your comment is like the chocolate with cream I am going to enjoy after my usual morning'walk with my dog.......... TY so much Andrea! :+) Ellie Daphne