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Sinfully Salty

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Sinfully Salty

I can't pass the salt without takin' a lick,
I'm a bear in a man suit, it gives me a kick.

If she plans on abscondin' with the Morton's container,
There's sea salt hidden in the cupboard for later!

But she'll never remember this donchatell,
My tiny container of gourmet Fleur De Sel (hehe)!

And if all of it's found and she's dancin' for joy,
I'll just have a sip of the juice of the soy.

I've saved this for last, it's the best donchasee -
It's the taste of the skin that's been kissed by the sea! (hers)

(Every word here is very serious so forget about it)

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  1. Date: 11/7/2013 11:57:00 AM
    Craig,*nice* SWEET Or SALTY win................... HUGS ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 11/6/2013 7:25:00 PM
    Hello Craig, , Congratulations On your way to xool Sweet & Sour win... always~ Linda aka PD

  1. Date: 11/6/2013 8:52:00 AM
    Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!!Great rhythm and flow..Sara

  1. Date: 11/5/2013 3:42:00 PM
    Oh my this definitely would be in my top 3. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/5/2013 10:43:00 AM
    Totally!!!!! Congratulations...... :-) :-)

  1. Date: 11/5/2013 7:55:00 AM
    this was so cute,Craig. A great entry in my contest. Congratulations

  1. Date: 10/22/2013 6:53:00 PM
    Clever and seductive. Love it!

  1. Date: 10/15/2013 2:14:00 AM
    creative enjoyed the shakers out of it

  1. Date: 10/8/2013 4:54:00 PM
    wonderful! the last couplet is the best, indeed!

  1. Date: 10/8/2013 9:28:00 AM
    Great one Craig. I loved the way it turned at the end... forbidden salt becomes a passion to the lips. I have a husband who literally drenches his food in salt... and not the healthy kind either. I tend to move the salt away from him at the table-- guilty !!!

  1. Date: 10/7/2013 9:40:00 PM
    It's between salty and sweety, Craig

  1. Date: 10/7/2013 7:08:00 PM
    Very serious and very funny indeed. Great write.