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Silly spring alliteration

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Silly spring alliteration

A pig in peplum and pearls
under a pergola twirls.
Pendulous petunias sway
while percussion plays.
Whispering spring breezes,
a tickle in my nose, i sneezes.

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  1. Date: 8/15/2013 4:02:00 PM
    Ha Ha Raskin.. And really good to read today haven't heard from you for quite a time..' hope you are well and pisitive; Joe..)

  1. Date: 4/4/2013 7:05:00 AM
    Fun poem and love the ending. Silly words are a breath of fresh air, unless your nose is stuffed.

  1. Date: 4/1/2013 8:17:00 AM
    Spring comes with many fragrances ...... No wonder that the nose responds ... - A nice poem to read Raskin! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 4/1/2013 7:30:00 AM
    Cute one..Enjoyed reading ..For some reason it reminded me of the new ads on TV featuring the pig..Thanks for stopping by..Those mommas be it a bear or human don't want no one messing with their babies..That is what I see humorous about my work "female bear"...Sara

    Kendrick Avatar Sara Kendrick
    Date: 4/1/2013 7:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    She was hungry, been trapped in that den with those two babes all winter and now a bunch of boys....Ha!!!..Sara