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She Smacked My Butt

                             My muse came around this afternoon
                                     Smacked my butt she did
                          And it hasn`t been that red since last June
                                     Nearly cried like a little kid

                                 Now Im running about with a rear
                                Covered with red and white stripes
                             Wont show it to ya`,I run away in fear
                              Wouldn`t hurt more,even with spikes

March 4th-2012

Don`t even ask where this one came from..hahaha!

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  1. Date: 6/23/2012 4:14:00 PM
    This sums up that abstruse little muse. Quite shy when a door opens, the phone rings, or confronted by any miniscule distraction. But when time comes for a confrontation, it can smack your butt real good!:) Mine's still around, but it's as though it mocks me...mutter mutter.. Have a nice weekend! Mikki

  1. Date: 4/21/2012 8:30:00 PM
    rereading this one. I sure like it!

  1. Date: 4/6/2012 11:33:00 AM
    Yikes!* Yah, it hurt but I had to laugh just the same; some things are worth the pain and it is fun to be silly sometimes eh Arild! Loved it.

  1. Date: 3/28/2012 11:56:00 AM
    cute... makes one smile! Your job is done.

  1. Date: 3/25/2012 2:21:00 AM
    Haha, sorry I couldn't help but snicker here, Arild! I sure am glad that I clicked on this one! Sorry to hear about her smacking your butt, but since you came up with a such a funny write, heehee can she smack your butt again? Pretty please?? Kidding! :) btw, I think the raindrops headed their way over here-- heavens burst to tears earlier, & we're still left with an overcast day-- That's good to know you have rain-free weekend weather :) Enjoy it!! :D

  1. Date: 3/15/2012 10:53:00 AM
    Arlid-LOL this is so funny! Love the title and love the write. Love your latest comments to me too-LOL :)

  1. Date: 3/8/2012 7:53:00 PM
    did it produce any good stuff, or just take you through the pain?

  1. Date: 3/8/2012 2:31:00 PM
    This poem's title is still giving me the giggles...was it a bday write????? Inquiring minds....?

  1. Date: 3/8/2012 2:23:00 PM
    enjoying the vsual fun Arild.. now run to fridge and get some ice .. luv.. to cool those red and white stripes.. witty and wild ..and cool ..haha..

  1. Date: 3/7/2012 2:51:00 PM
    From where did this one come?..Enjoyed reading and got a chuckle..I was writitng along similar lines this afternoon.I am a long way from finishing though..Thanks for the congrats on my work..Sara

  1. Date: 3/7/2012 11:30:00 AM
    funny write and fun too! not at all what i expected :P

  1. Date: 3/7/2012 4:40:00 AM
    hehe, now I want to know where it came from Arild???? :D I laughed out loud at work with this one :) Hey thank you for your shoulder, why do I always write stuff that brings our the protective side in you? I feel I have to tell you that luckily that one was inspired by the "missing" contest :) hugs and love Wilma

    Ertsland Avatar Arild Andresen Ertsland
    Date: 3/7/2012 11:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I love the vibes I get from your writes,Wilma.Can feel your precious soul in alot of your work..hugs and love back at ya`!
  1. Date: 3/6/2012 3:45:00 PM
    Haha! Nice one. 8D Always, Laura

  1. Date: 3/6/2012 7:21:00 AM either have violent birthdays or you are really in the doghouse with the MRS!! Please give up this secret!...The title is a total hoot! I gotta go see what your woman is up to pinching my chubby cheeks either!....G.

    Ertsland Avatar Arild Andresen Ertsland
    Date: 3/6/2012 8:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I`ve been a naughty boy Gwendolen..hahaha:))
  1. Date: 3/5/2012 11:34:00 PM
    hahahaha. So was it a GOOD thing or bad thing. Sounds good. like "hurt so good!!!"

    Ertsland Avatar Arild Andresen Ertsland
    Date: 3/6/2012 8:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ...hahaha..was kinda good though..smiles
  1. Date: 3/5/2012 9:25:00 PM
    ha ha... well well... I'm not gonna say anything... I'm gonna move on to another poem.. that does not spike my always..pd

  1. Date: 3/5/2012 10:29:00 AM
    enjoyed the spontaneous flow of this offering, arild... a natural, indeed!... i like lots!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 3/5/2012 7:16:00 AM
    I enjoyed reading your excellent piece of poetry today Arild. I hope this new week ahead proves fruitful to you within your life and in your poetry also. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/4/2012 8:06:00 PM
    I won't! LoL, sounds like you have an interesting afternoon Arild ;)

  1. Date: 3/4/2012 3:15:00 PM
    Cute one Arild so what did you do to deserve this kind of treatment, and don't tell me moi, Saint Arild? lol love your sense of humor. hugs,vie