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cream covered breasts
rise and fall as she runs 
clothed he follows

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  1. Date: 4/6/2014 8:42:00 PM
    I like this Debbie, seems congrat are in order :)

  1. Date: 1/22/2014 8:15:00 PM
    I hope she got away safely from him.

  1. Date: 11/11/2013 8:37:00 PM
    Love this one, Debbie! Congrats!! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 11/9/2013 10:39:00 AM
    nice win DG, xox~ LINDA

  1. Date: 11/9/2013 9:05:00 AM
    great makes the reader ponder thoughts...congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 11/8/2013 6:10:00 PM
    An interesting senryu. You can take this different ways. Congrats on your win, Deb! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 11/8/2013 4:44:00 PM
    congrats on your placement.

  1. Date: 11/8/2013 8:25:00 AM
    Bet his clothes don't stay put for long !Congrats on your win:)

  1. Date: 11/7/2013 11:06:00 PM
    Debbie, , Congratulations, on your win........ LOVE ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 11/7/2013 7:04:00 PM
    Well, she may have just run off with their car keys....C'MON... Gimmee a break.... Congratulations...... Jake

  1. Date: 11/7/2013 3:35:00 PM
    You never answered my question about it, but I am so glad to see it on the list. It was one of my favorites in this contest. congratulations, Debs.

    Guzzi Avatar Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 11/7/2013 4:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I wanted you to think ALL the things you thought
  1. Date: 11/7/2013 6:38:00 AM
    This one raises many questions?..Was she jogging or running from him?..Enjoyed reading this one today..Sara..I have an appointment this afternoon to see the doctor..

  1. Date: 10/24/2013 11:38:00 AM
    This is very hot : )sizzle grizzle in the grill

  1. Date: 10/22/2013 2:57:00 PM
    hmmm, it can be taken two ways, as fun or as something more ominous. was it meant as fun? I likes!!

  1. Date: 10/21/2013 8:31:00 PM
    A sexy senryu... Who knew? Jack

  1. Date: 10/19/2013 4:17:00 PM
    lol Debbie love the humour superb dear lady Shadow x smile

  1. Date: 10/19/2013 10:58:00 AM
    She sounds a tease!!! Bet his clothes don't stay put for long !!!! Good one!!