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Seasons Like Life


Leaves: E a r l y fall of browns ochres and reds flying with the wind Seasons like life on warm day summer leaves
Ninette: my second attempt.

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  1. Date: 12/7/2012 7:06:00 AM
    Nice. The shape reminded me of a kite, appropriate to the words.

  1. Date: 5/8/2012 2:36:00 PM
    I can even smell the leaves Ruben, fall is always a time to be in love with the weather, such languid days to soak in. Lovely poetry!

  1. Date: 5/3/2012 10:40:00 PM
    ruben, I tried doing both Center AND italics. Looks like you can only do one thing and not any more than that!!

  1. Date: 4/3/2012 10:47:00 PM
    Ruben, which entry were you saying you would withdraw? Come on, you better be joking with me!!!

  1. Date: 4/2/2012 1:46:00 AM
    I liked your first attempt also, Ruben...Please send me the title of the poem u were mentioning to me yesterday...the tanka u wrote 2 yrs ago..I looked thru your list but it did not jump out at me...

  1. Date: 4/1/2012 11:17:00 AM
    a flowing write depicting the turn of seasons, ruben... well rendered! best wishes and huggs! :)

  1. Date: 4/1/2012 10:15:00 AM
    pure ecstasy lovely lines of imagery and visual delight.. thankxx for sweet words on my Love Lines Litany.. hope sponsor gets a charge out of it..know he will .. happy Sunday luv..

  1. Date: 3/31/2012 8:23:00 AM
    I love the connection between the beginnigng and the end Ruben..An early autumn and then the end of summer.. The leaves which get blown with the wind and then departure of someone.. seasons are exactly like life.. Hope i have still a long way to autumn :) I love staying in this world with its rain and flowers :) Lovely post as always Ru-Charma

    Chircop  Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 4/11/2012 11:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Somehow i always do apart on those occasions when i'm completely 'OPELESS :)
    O. Avatar Ruben O.
    Date: 3/31/2012 7:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I think you're the only one who gets the idea, Charma-Ruben
  1. Date: 3/29/2012 9:14:00 PM
    fall of browns... love this words... a beautiful day you give me today Ruben with this simple yet captivating ninette. For all this time, I thank you

  1. Date: 3/29/2012 8:11:00 PM
    gr8 one .. congrats on the HM...

  1. Date: 3/29/2012 5:03:00 AM
    cool poem! Ruben! jimbo

  1. Date: 3/28/2012 6:01:00 PM
    Lovely Ruben! congrats. BG

  1. Date: 3/28/2012 3:59:00 PM
    A lovely visual, Ruben. Congrats on your HM! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 3/28/2012 1:07:00 PM
    clever piece, Ruben - many congrats : )

  1. Date: 3/28/2012 11:13:00 AM
    congrats on your win! nice wordplay :)

  1. Date: 3/28/2012 8:12:00 AM
    Congratulations on your placement in Joann's "Ninette" contest Ruben. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/28/2012 5:35:00 AM
    The shape of your poem could be a leaf and then the descriptions bring it to life. Very lovely Ruben, your descriptions of the leaves paint such a lovely picture for the mind. :)

  1. Date: 3/27/2012 8:45:00 PM
    BIG congratulations on your lovely second attempt!

  1. Date: 3/27/2012 8:39:00 PM
    Fall is my favourite time of the year because of the beautiful colorful leaves, I think your poem looks lovely. Congratulations

  1. Date: 3/27/2012 8:21:00 PM
    congrats Ruben on an HM for this exceptional write in Ninette luv..