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Searching for the dark

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Searching for the dark

Sunsets moon rises
I see it all 
Sleepless nights 
Winter summer spring and fall
Where did it go
I fell, you moved 
Sunrises moonsets 
I felt- my fault 
You're like the  sun and the 
You come and you go  
When will the light turn to dark 
And the light never to return?! 

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  1. Date: 9/16/2012 8:34:00 PM
    Metaphors strong in this one, nice piece.