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Ru-Bee-n and the Dove

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Ru-Bee-n and the Dove


                                Broken Butterfly feeding
                                on nectar from my flowers
                                _"These are my...Don't bite me...Ouch!

                                I will keep my proboscis
                                and my stinger for the spring
                                when the Maltese dove returns
                                Charmaine, where are you!

Ruben Ortellao

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  1. Date: 5/5/2012 9:23:00 PM
    got it Ruben, and already answered it.

  1. Date: 4/22/2012 12:56:00 PM
    Smile ˜ I feel like a hummingbird diving into the honey hive of sweetness with loving bumble bees kissing colourful butterflies dancing amid the gardens perfumed breeze * Smooch me, my love, Always, John!:) ˜

    Date: 5/4/2012 12:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Ooops, I Must Have Been Thirsty This Day; Sorweee *
    Date: 4/23/2012 9:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ..."Googoo Gaagaa" ˜
  1. Date: 4/16/2012 11:47:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Linda-Marie's "Bite Me" contest Ruben. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/16/2012 11:02:00 AM
    Congrats on your win! cute :)

  1. Date: 4/15/2012 6:50:00 AM
    Congratulations on your big win..:) I'm happy for you.. and hey Someone stole some nectar from those flowers... I want back what's mine ..bzzzzzzzzzz >:/ :)

    O. Avatar Ruben O.
    Date: 4/15/2012 7:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    All the flowers are filled to their utmost capacity! : ) Waiting for spring! : )
  1. Date: 4/15/2012 3:29:00 AM
    Congrats Ruben O,, this one is good, umm use of clever words.. looks so scientific :D !!!

  1. Date: 4/15/2012 1:48:00 AM
    Congratulations on your super win Ruben xx

  1. Date: 4/14/2012 11:12:00 PM
    Ruben, a super congrats!!! this was a fun contest... good night ;-) xox~PD

  1. Date: 4/14/2012 10:45:00 PM
    Congrats, Ruben! A well deserved first place. I love your clever write. Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 4/14/2012 8:44:00 PM
    Loved yours, ruben. Congrats on the win.

  1. Date: 4/14/2012 8:38:00 PM
    Very clever Ruben. congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 4/14/2012 8:28:00 PM
    Nice approach for this contest, Ruben..quite an original angle. Congrats on your super duper win! Gwendolen

  1. Date: 4/14/2012 7:51:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win Ruben! very well done!! big hugs,love deb

  1. Date: 4/14/2012 7:21:00 PM
    congrats Ruben on first place win for this super entry luv..

  1. Date: 4/13/2012 1:55:00 PM
    I do adore your nectar, Rubee . . . love the poem to my favs it goes..

  1. Date: 4/13/2012 9:38:00 AM
    thankxx for joining in the fun of my crazy contest Ruben.. judging will be done over weekend luv as my Ron helps me out .. good luck.. know will be so "bitten" by your entry luv..

  1. Date: 4/12/2012 1:18:00 PM
    awesome wit displayed but that is your niche Ruben, had loads of fun, reading this one ;) all the best for Linda's contest!

  1. Date: 4/12/2012 11:16:00 AM
    Per usual your clever pen strikes again!! And thanks for your comments Ruben--going on vacation for a week--hope it's worth it!!

  1. Date: 4/11/2012 10:55:00 PM
    Returned soupmail. Oh, some double-entendre in the Dodildoitsu above? :D

    Aechtner Avatar Chris D. Aechtner
    Date: 4/12/2012 8:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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    Chircop  Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 4/11/2012 11:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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  1. Date: 4/10/2012 3:19:00 PM
    Entertaining and fun....great write!