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Below is the poem entitled ROTTEN LUCK which was written by poet Denise Hopkins. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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written 10th May 2001

Will I ever get off this blooming roundabout
 why must I, always need to scream and shout
As things just start to settle
 I will be forced to start on a new battle

Will it ever end
 I need a really good friend
Someone that will listen 
 and, not have to be my competition  

Someone who cares
 a friend is all I need..
But, enemy's are all I ever see
 will it ever stop, this lifetime of endless rotten, bad luck....

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  1. Date: 7/17/2013 11:45:00 PM
    Denise what you say is what I also experience, I come to read your poems for solace of my mind, an escape from reality, poetry soothes the mind and clears your head, it is good therapy and then I go back to the real world which at times is a nightmare, but that's life unfortunately, your poetry technique is good here, I love your expressions in your poem.