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Below is the poem entitled Ripples which was written by poet craig cornish. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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the stone skipped then sank
leaving ripples where it glanced
 so I watched them run
  the children bathed on the shore
   and laughed in the morning sun

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  1. Date: 10/13/2012 2:55:00 PM
    very nice and I can imagine that middle line for both parts!! Is it for the pivot contest?

    cornish Avatar craig cornish
    Date: 10/13/2012 3:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes, Thanks Andrea---I've been dragged into the Tanks world!!
  1. Date: 10/13/2012 9:29:00 AM
    Enjoyed reading this one..I could just see the scene..I am glad that I chose this one to read today...Thanks for the uplifitng comment on my work..Sara

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 12:54:00 PM
    yo, craig.. just did something like this just now... merry, merry feel!... your lines grab my attention and traps me to read the rest.. winning huggs!,,:)