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RIP Virginity

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RIP Virginity

Dear Sir, my innocence is gone now, no more fear 
Do you love to **** me again, I am always here. 
I wonder when you taught me how to use a pen, 
I was so into you but my ****** was in pain! 
I was crying; I was too immature to understand
I was turning only 13, I couldn't feel what happened. 
but I promise I never forget what you taught me at the end. 
I begged you to stop and looked into your eyes, 
there was a reflection of a cruel world, that’s  what I deserved!
Don't be afraid, mommy never knows what you did, 
Nobody knows that you made me bleed. 
Dear sir, my innocence is gone with all my tears,
as I had no safe place to hide myself from fears.
Nobody saw anything as your world was so blind! 
having hidden hatred inside, a virgin died. 
Dear sir, time cannot erase your memories, 
time doesn't heal all wounds, that you marked, 
yes, you took my innocence that will be always on my mind.
My innocent world was shattered by your touch
Hope no one ever has to experience such
For all the pain, all the cruelty, thank you very much!

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  1. Date: 5/14/2015 5:50:00 PM
    Farhana, Congrats on the nice win. SKAT love

  1. Date: 5/10/2015 8:39:00 PM
    Farhana.. Congrats on your win!

    ALLISON Avatar JAN ALLISON
    Date: 5/11/2015 4:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    It was a computer glitch Dave the poem was not moved on to rounds 2 and 3 and shoudl never have appeared on the winners list - I have soup mailed both the writer and soup to let them know:-) Hugs Jan xx
  1. Date: 1/21/2015 12:01:00 PM
    such a lost soul....this one who couldn't even understand the pleasantry of 'just', the virgin's silhouette ! Bravo with this write dear poet ! Have a blessed day....much love, james

  1. Date: 12/26/2014 11:12:00 PM
    FARHANA, CONGRATULATIONS ... this is a nice sweet little HM... hugs.. Linda

  1. Date: 12/24/2014 10:30:00 AM
    Very personal, very tragic--hope it's not true. A nice write.

  1. Date: 11/23/2014 3:21:00 PM
    Dear Farhana, First of all I want to congratulate you for your win. I was just speechless when I read your poem. It was just breathtaking and I want to congratulate you for the courage you show by writing about some ugly truth of the society.

  1. Date: 10/16/2014 8:24:00 PM
    very vivid telling of a traumatic event...

  1. Date: 9/10/2014 11:05:00 PM
    An awesome write that sheds a spotlight on an ugly truth. Well done my dear Farhana . I invite you to read "Depravity" in my writes.

  1. Date: 8/29/2014 5:26:00 PM
    You do a sterling job of describing what sexual violence does to a girl/woman. Some men will never understand; they are the embodiment of beyond-the-pale selfishness. They know nothing about love.

  1. Date: 8/29/2014 7:06:00 AM
    Visiting again to congratulate you,

  1. Date: 8/28/2014 9:37:00 PM
    Painful paint Farhana

  1. Date: 8/28/2014 12:26:00 PM
    many congrats on your win in the slam contest:-) hugs Jan x

  1. Date: 8/28/2014 11:32:00 AM
    Farhana, Congratulation, on your awesome win. Thanks for the support. Loving ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 7/20/2014 10:07:00 PM
    Time is of essence and knowledge brings wisdom... A well written life-story... Hugs Verlena

  1. Date: 7/20/2014 10:06:00 PM
    Time is of essence and knowledge brings wisdom... A well written life-story... Hugs Verlena

  1. Date: 7/20/2014 10:05:00 PM
    Time is of essence and knowledge brings wisdom... A well written life-story... Hugs Verlena

  1. Date: 7/8/2014 4:58:00 PM
    Something so cherished and then lost to another's lust...it's sad. This poem does what is intended; the feelings invoked are intense. A very great write, dear Farhana. Lots of love and understanding...:(

  1. Date: 6/29/2014 9:45:00 AM
    went back and read this and appreciate your raw honesty, Sometimes these type poems are the best to write bc they help get out the ugly stuff in life. kinda therapeutic ya know? Keep on Writin'! People have really taken a liking to your poetry. GOOD STUFF!~JSL

  1. Date: 6/28/2014 2:40:00 PM
    nice

  1. Date: 6/26/2014 11:13:00 AM
    Dear Farhana, I'm sending you a Soup Mail. Love, Carolyn

    Akter Avatar Farhana Akter
    Date: 6/27/2014 12:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks dear
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