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Reposing Roses - A Summer Couplet

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Reposing Roses - A Summer Couplet

Reposing roses and dozing posies exhale perfumed sighs with nearing night
as the drowsy June moon softly suffuses scent-soaked skies with languid light.



14/6/2013
for 'Lovin' Summer' contest

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  1. Date: 7/28/2013 8:15:00 AM
    Just stopping by to give a big HI!

  1. Date: 7/28/2013 8:15:00 AM
    Caught frank's sweet poem about you.

  1. Date: 7/25/2013 10:10:00 PM
    Are you sudgesting a collab? Sorry no experince with ant powder yet. But it may be in my immediate future as I go down to the bottem.

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    Date: 7/25/2013 10:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


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  1. Date: 7/25/2013 9:29:00 PM
    Recent works.

  1. Date: 7/25/2013 9:28:00 PM
    Can't. Find ant powder. Post here. My piece is the third in the series.

  1. Date: 7/25/2013 12:25:00 PM
    charlotte, so nice to see you again with such an intricate, image-filled work... much dleighted!..:) hugggs

  1. Date: 7/25/2013 10:00:00 AM
    How delicate..soft and beautiful this couplet is..I don't know which part of it i like best cause i like it all.Im going to add you in my fav poets list dear so i won t loose reading you in this big bowl of soup.Tnks for your very kind comments..re my humble verse.

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 3:08:00 AM
    Nice poem. I like this bit, "exhale perfumed sighs with nearing night" very nice imagery.

  1. Date: 7/15/2013 1:31:00 AM
    Back to have a look at these roses again, Charlotte, ..anything new? J

  1. Date: 7/7/2013 10:57:00 AM
    loving your summer couplet :-) CONGRATULATIONS -in Andrea, contest!!! Take Care *xox* Linda

  1. Date: 6/30/2013 7:32:00 PM
    Internal rhyme, alliteration...You name it!... All cramed beatifully into two exquisite lines...I am fast becoming your number one fan, Charlotte!...When you get a chance, please do me the honor of reading my poem 'Mausoleum'...Thanks - Tim

  1. Date: 6/30/2013 4:48:00 AM
    Warm summer nights! Love them. Congrats on your win. Rick

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 6:02:00 PM
    I doubt that I could ever write so much into 2 lines... Brilliant.... Congrats....Jake

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 3:15:00 PM
    Oh My! I love how everyone is beautifying summer, but here you are Charlotte, giving summer a deeper and better taste. Congratulations in Andrea's steaming hot summer couplet contest... what else could we ask for -the constant reminder of the hottest season that wonders through my Texas Sky. <3<3<3 ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 1:27:00 PM
    Love the imagery!Congrats on your Charlotte.

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 1:19:00 PM
    This one makes me say..........ahhhhhh......it is so beautiful !!! I loved it.....would place it higher on my list, ..for sure!!

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 8:52:00 AM
    Charlotte, I really loved your use of alliteration. I guess I was going more for the shorter ones but yours is very lovely. congrats in my contest.

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 7:42:00 AM
    Charlotte, love the mix of senses, the flow of the meter---so much purveyed in two lines !

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 7:33:00 AM
    I enjoyed very much, congrats

  1. Date: 6/17/2013 8:56:00 AM
    WOW. I foresee this as the winning couplet! I don't know how you managed to pack so much imagery into two lines. And the intricate rhymes and alliteration are just - wow! Blown away! (Fave)

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