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Remember Me

When the winds can't play the sounds of music or the whispered promises of loves intent, Tell me what happens when all is silent tell me what fills your hearts content When the sun has set in its tomb again and we're there to watch the dying day, Tell me what happens when all is silent tell me how long you plan to stay When a God that you just can't believe in comes to pull our souls apart , Tell me what part of me you'll still hold close my tar black soul, or my broken heart When the shadows and the tallest trees have gathered around the raging seas, Tell me what happens when all goes still tell me how you'll remember me- tell me how you'll remember me

Copyright © Dana Smith

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  1. Date: 7/29/2013 11:35:00 PM
    raging sadness, lost and hopeless, stillness declared, what's madness?

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 6:14:00 PM
    I see I need to catch up again. This is a wonderful poem. With my new interest in music composition I will definitely have to further investigate the lyric form, because this really sounds like it would be a great song. Great work.

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  1. Date: 7/11/2013 3:34:00 PM
    This is such a beautiful write, a very awesome poem here my friend! I loved how you portrayed this piece, so very lovely and full of excellence! What a magnificent verse this is, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 7/11/2013 10:20:00 AM
    I love poems like this on such an important topic. It takes so much to value ourselves. But, how much more it takes for another to value you the same way. Spectacular.