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rains in my garden

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rains in my garden

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                                           Rains  in  my  garden,

                                           Zinnias  look  freshly  bathed --

                                           My  shoes  are  muddy.


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  1. Date: 3/17/2012 8:37:00 AM
    Good morning, stopping by to say "HAPPY ST PATRICK DAY TO YOU , GOD BLESS~ ALWAYS PD ;-)

  1. Date: 2/25/2012 10:22:00 AM
    Good haiku, Gautami. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 2/24/2012 11:37:00 AM
    Gautami, you did spendidly with this haiku, especially the juxtaposition. Well written. Congratulations on your win in Charles' contest!

  1. Date: 2/24/2012 6:28:00 AM
    Congrats on your win Goutami.Loved it first time around.

  1. Date: 2/24/2012 5:36:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Charles' Haiku contest Gautami. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/24/2012 5:25:00 AM
    When I read this one I get the sense you just gathered fresh cut flowers for your dinner table...Such a sweet haiku..glad it made the list!! Gwendolen

  1. Date: 2/23/2012 8:57:00 PM
    Excellent win for your excellent poem, Gautami, A very well deserved win.

  1. Date: 2/23/2012 8:14:00 PM
    Nicely done! Great Haiku, Gautami! Congratulations! Ruben.

  1. Date: 2/23/2012 5:53:00 PM
    I hope you are happy with your placement in my contest. It was a better contest for you having taken part. Thanks.

  1. Date: 2/22/2012 1:34:00 AM
    I really enjoyed reading your haiku this morning-Charma

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 8:02:00 PM
    This is a delightful haiku, Gautami. Good luck in the contest.

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 6:41:00 PM
    nice poetry. I enjoyed reading it.

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 2:24:00 PM
    Kash pointed out that I do not follow directions very well....the rondelet was under is back up after extensive repairs. ha ha. thanks for asking. lol.

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 1:41:00 PM
    cool haiku ~always p.d.

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 1:29:00 PM
    The extra effect of raindrops are sooo cute and the impromptu puddle too. Zinnias are the hardiest of our flowers here in Ohio...Like a floral rainbow but without the scent. Great haiku with a reverse position that will wow Charles. I really like how you approached this contest. Good luck to you! Love wrote a quick twin rondelet...give it a peek. :) :) :0

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 1:02:00 PM
    Very good haiku with nice Juxtaposition.Miss your poetry here.Best wishes if for the contest.

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 12:51:00 PM
    Good one Gautami!!! - oxox Anne-Lise