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Rain Song

You played me like a violin
I can't believe I fell again
But clouds revealed the moon, and I was taken
Your eyes were closed
Your words were spare
You ran your fingers through my hair
But from your whispered breath, dark lies were spoken,
The moon betrayed me, .......a storm is waking.......
Have you betrayed me? world is shaking.......

Those empty words that still resound
pound in my head and I have found
Your love was like a tunnel going nowhere -
I crossed a bridge
And took a risk, 
I fell right in,
But couldn't swim 
The drowning rush surrounds me like a river

I dived right in it........I can't deny it
I would survive cry a river

You came to me without a plan
I should have known that it would end
The echo of the thunder tried to warn me

A distant voice
Inside my head
A cloud appeared with laden air
And pulled me where the heart's a frozen ember

I see the lightning......  I am frightened
I hear the plunder....  a distant thunder

I hear it now, the pouring rain
It beats against the window pane
And now the chill just sends a quiver through me

Storms only come
When I'm alone
Torrential songs are drowning me 
A broken heart can't stop the rain from coming in

When vows were spoken,     a sun was shining.......
But I heard thunder, ....       and you denied it

And truth came pouring down upon my head


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  1. Date: 2/25/2014 9:09:00 AM
    talking of love's contradiction, you nailed it, always deliver the poetic goods! loads of cheers to you on your top win!.. huggs

  1. Date: 2/24/2014 5:58:00 PM
    Yours is so very romantic, it sings to me, congratulations on your win Carrie, luv xxx

  1. Date: 2/24/2014 4:48:00 PM
    lovely Carrie congrats on win hugs

  1. Date: 2/24/2014 2:15:00 PM
    Carrie congratulations on your well deserve win. A great piece you've written. Warm smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 2/24/2014 3:44:00 AM
    Enjoyed your write on mood music and congrats on the win,carrie

  1. Date: 2/24/2014 2:58:00 AM
    Congratulations Carrie ....Seren

  1. Date: 2/24/2014 12:07:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win Carrie--this was a really tough batch to judge, all so well written. I appreciated yours for your use of space to generate rhythm and mood. Thanks for entering my contest.

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 11:35:00 PM
    Congratulations on another very fine win, dear Carrie! Love, Annalise

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 8:11:00 PM
    This is a hit for sure! Who can we get to record it? Congratulations! RAY

  1. Date: 2/12/2013 4:45:00 PM
    Carrie, you are so talented. I love reading your poetry. This is another fine win for you and a deserving one too. Loved this and could imagine it being sung to a country tune. Congratulations on your win!

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 10:29:00 PM
    Such a fine write with great imagery, glad that you scored, congrats!! Jag

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 3:36:00 PM
    Oh, Carrie, so creative you are! Awesome rendition here. Congratulations on your win in Frank's contest. love and hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 12:17:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win, Carrie.

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 10:51:00 AM
    This is amazingly beautiful lyric my dear Carrie! Big congrats on your big win! love/hugs, LG

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 9:29:00 AM
    Good morning Carrie.. Congrats!!! :-) on your winning poem. *Always~PD

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 8:38:00 AM
    Rains of a broken heart...excellently worded. Congrats on your win !!

  1. Date: 1/24/2013 8:35:00 PM
    This was perfectly crafted for the contest!! I love it, flows quite gracefully my dear poet friend :)

  1. Date: 1/24/2013 5:49:00 PM
    Awesome!! A sure winner, this is, Carrie. No need to wish you luck here. Enjoyed singing your choice words to "Hallejujah"... Great job! Love, Annalise