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Rage Inverted

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Rage Inverted

Smother me darkness, let me bury my fears
Coals in my heart, I stumble through live hopes
I step aside - don’t touch me winds of change
Leave me alone, I need to find my way again

Dreams – don’t bleed me, did you have me tread wrong? 
I could hurl this life away; shards on your conscience
You don’t win if I am ruined and if I lose, 
You lose too, and your undoing would be me

Solitude – I danced my whole life into your arms
Did you give me a choice, or was it again a deceit? 
Did you need me so much in your solo existence? 
Could you not find another who would give you this much! 

Walk with me, my childhood, let me live you again
Let me orphan myself into life, and learn things my way
I would trace my existence on another set of dreams
Dreams that don’t trade-off as love goes missing…

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  1. Date: 9/12/2014 1:49:00 PM
    Wow, young lady, its the first time I read your poem, and the way you wrote this poem, is unbelievable, so so deep, so beautiful, the way you describe each word in a phrase are unforgettable, wow what an outstanding writer you are. I am so happy I passed by to get connected, and look for the future to read more of your amazing poem. Hugs Terry xoxo

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan
    Date: 9/17/2014 12:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Terry, I am glad you liked this poem:) hugs.
  1. Date: 9/24/2013 7:26:00 AM
    This piece is exceptional adding to my favorites!

  1. Date: 9/23/2013 5:28:00 PM
    great title for this profound piece of writing on love gone wrong. Great job!

  1. Date: 9/23/2013 4:09:00 PM
    A wonderful heartfelt write, you have a wonderful way with words. thanks for sharing this great write with us...Peter

  1. Date: 9/23/2013 2:39:00 PM
    Powerful. You really did flip rage on its head. Anger is inspiration in hiding. Discover it. You did.

  1. Date: 9/23/2013 11:59:00 AM
    I can relate to this completely. It would be so nice if we could return to our childhoods and change the outcome of our futures. If it were possible, I would do it in a heart beat! Excellent writing, Bindu! I loved it, and I am adding it to my favorites! :)

  1. Date: 9/23/2013 8:21:00 AM
    I feel the rage brewing in every line. Amazing write full of angst...You have a fabulous way with words. Hugs

  1. Date: 9/23/2013 6:34:00 AM
    I just sent you a soup mail xxx

  1. Date: 9/23/2013 6:13:00 AM
    Your poetry is very deep Bindu, the heart expresses well the sense of abandonment, when raging wars come to put us under, I am excited to get started, will try and come up with a topic, love peace and friendship xxx

  1. Date: 9/23/2013 5:49:00 AM
    It's beautiful, serious and philosophical. Lovely free verse. G.

  1. Date: 9/23/2013 4:15:00 AM
    Deep and clever write Bindhu.

  1. Date: 9/23/2013 3:03:00 AM
    Hi Bindu, A soul searching write...Well expressed..thanks for visiting my work.. Ken