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Primitive Fracture

Raw and primal 
            your hawk eyes 
sketch my soul
           Indelibly in blood 
amid a passions sky
                       painted orange
and watered in red

Your wide dark wings 
         of alluring untouchable
blank me in moments 
              of lost in the wind

I reach faltered hands 
           to caress your sheen
but come up empty handed 
            as you soar out of reach

 Your spirit is what crashes me to rocks
 and deals death like blows to my tender heart

I long to capture your silken fire
             and stamp your soul as mine
but the distance forms a chasm 
                  amid your hover

I see you brood the clouds 
                  with your power
and toss the waves
                 of my wistful sea

Tease me with the hopes 
              of loves survival
and dash off once more 
              to celestial heights

I am left to tremble
       in the absence of you
watching your wild 
    disappear in the clouds

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  1. Date: 7/27/2012 9:54:00 AM
    Such a passionate, powerful poem. I will read more of your poems.

  1. Date: 3/31/2009 2:46:00 PM
    such beautiful write full of passion and love- i love it

  1. Date: 3/31/2009 8:46:00 AM
    Christie,....i read and i read this one. I started posting a comment and had to change it,...this is really inspiring to know that great poets still exist! To challenge my thoughts like that ! I loved it,..TY again! james

  1. Date: 3/30/2009 10:40:00 AM
    ....this write is almost like night and day, compared to the last write of Yours which I just read!? But not in regards to the love and longing I do believe! Smile~"You" are such a treasure~with such a beautiful gift and heart! And again, I believe, that 'any' man, would be very blessed to have "You" by their side; and within their life!!!:):) Again, as always, wonderfully written and expressed write! "Love To "You & Brianna' Forever, John!!!"~Bye Beautiful Lady!!!:):):)

  1. Date: 3/30/2009 10:28:00 AM
    Smile? Yes, those big black Hawk wings....Well, thankfully I am on vacation right now~So I can help You track that primative species down~Smile~and don't worry; for I am a very good investigator; and I shall find that bird for You, if its the last ting I do!? Smile~And yet upon a much more serious note: I could feel the soul and passion from your very profound, sincere and deepened words within this write!!!:):)....cont....

  1. Date: 3/30/2009 7:37:00 AM
    The Christie Moses magic weaves its spell binding yet again.... lost in her weaving spin of word and verse.... we are taken through the journeys of her heart...... "we're not worthy, we're not worthy" LOL .... :) .... thank you for your comments Christie... praise indeed from a Goddess of poetry . :)

  1. Date: 3/29/2009 8:37:00 PM
    I love the last stanza! It totally rocks Christie. I can just see it so clearly. Amazing as ever love.

  1. Date: 3/29/2009 11:16:00 AM
    "Your spirit is what crashes me to rocks and deals death like blows to my tender heart". Wow, you deeply touched the inner heart of mine. Such lovely poetry. Such lovely composition.

  1. Date: 3/28/2009 4:41:00 PM
    An incredibly vivid and powerful poem, Christie! The images, the reaching out for a love who has abandoned you -- Wow!

  1. Date: 3/28/2009 10:27:00 AM
    Great poem from beginning to ending. Masterful work always...Raul

  1. Date: 3/28/2009 10:13:00 AM
    I loved it on the first go around and I am loving it now....who will clean up the mess Christie?..LOL...who is your dingle berry? know.... i am silly.

  1. Date: 3/28/2009 9:32:00 AM
    Wow what an opening Christie to draw the reader into your thoughts.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.

  1. Date: 3/28/2009 8:53:00 AM
    As ever PP , superb piece ....

  1. Date: 3/28/2009 6:50:00 AM
    Wow Christie. This is seriously excellent. Though frustrating and deeply sad, it is so well penned. No, that does not quite say enough, it is a brilliant write. Definitely one of your best, no matter how many times I have said that. Love, Shar

  1. Date: 3/28/2009 5:55:00 AM
    This is an amazing write. "painted orange and watere in red" great imagery here. This is a truly flawless write filled with passion and written from the soul of a skilled writer. Every line makes an impact on this reader. Thank you for sharing. Another to add to my many favorites. Smile from Lolita

  1. Date: 3/28/2009 5:21:00 AM
    I sent you a soup mail. Excellent write by the way, your words flow flawlessly.....Aleera