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Pound pound pound

Pound pound pound,
My head spins,

You hound hound hound,
With your god awful mouth you,

The sound sound sound,
From your ghastly guff is 3D,

I may smack smack smack,
Your god awful trap,

Round round round
You'll spin round with your face

No sound sound sound?
What? Now no sound from your

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  1. Date: 3/31/2011 2:47:00 PM
    Thanks for stopping by to comment on my poem! I hope you are not going through the above situation. Light & Love

  1. Date: 3/30/2011 11:25:00 AM
    Interestingly put together..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 3/30/2011 8:53:00 AM
    Sounds like you've been experiencing a lot of angst, Erastus. I can understand wanting to make someone stop "hounding" you. Like Carol, I hope this is fiction. I do like the impact the repeating words in the first line of each verse has. Best wishes, Carolyn

  1. Date: 3/30/2011 6:39:00 AM
    Nice alliteration in the verses on Pound, Erastus

  1. Date: 3/30/2011 5:46:00 AM
    Enjoyed reading this excellent piece of poetry this morning Erastus. Hope this is fiction. Thank you for sharing it. Love, Carol