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Portrait in Watercolour

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Portrait in Watercolour

red hair
       like a waterfall
          in rippling motion
           your precious face

                       mediterranean eyes
                       like mountain pools
                       on a moonlit night
                       reflecting the stars

                  soft lips
       moist like summer rain
glistening like dew on a rosebud
      warm as the sunset over
                 an ocean

         beautiful               big heart
 lake of love, tenderness and compassion
      flowing from you like a wide river
        touching all those around you
             buoyed by the current
                of your kindness
                    and caring


        a constant whirlpool of fluid thought
                                producing streams of wonderful words
       that tumble
          channelling my own thinking
   inspiring me

it is so dry here without you
how I long to bathe under that waterfall
how I dream of gazing into those mountain pools
my parched lips wait to be brushed by that sunlit ocean
my heart aches to be swept into that river
my body desires to drink from that well
my whole being is a vessel
sculpted and shaped to receive your precious waters
and protect them
for all time

Copyright © Nigel Fawcett

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  1. Date: 12/14/2008 7:56:00 AM
    Something is strangely wrong with my email today...hope it fixes soon! If not then I guess I will go insane. Hope your day is getting better. Love me

  1. Date: 11/3/2008 5:33:00 PM
    This was a talented write, a difficult at best write. Have a great day, Nigel. Vince

  1. Date: 11/3/2008 4:55:00 AM
    Have I told you today that I love this poem? Simply breathtaking, and inspires me to smile. Your far away friend, Christie

  1. Date: 11/2/2008 3:37:00 AM
    Beautiful! Such a loving poem for your sweetie!!! She must have been swooning. awesome, love Kridtin

  1. Date: 11/1/2008 6:50:00 PM
    Have I mentioned I love this poem? (as i read it for the hundreth timeLOL) Your friend, Christie

  1. Date: 11/1/2008 11:55:00 AM
    Hey Nigel you sneaky fellow, how did you know I had red hair lol great write. bravo!

  1. Date: 11/1/2008 11:13:00 AM
    Outstanding message, concept and design are very evident in this poem - A sincere desire to love and be loved just leap off the page and flow into the readers heart like a river - wonderful poetry - God Bless

  1. Date: 11/1/2008 7:50:00 AM
    OH My goodness..I think this may be the best loving verse Ive read in awhile. I think I'm jelous ( not one of my faults..i have many others.) BG

  1. Date: 11/1/2008 7:20:00 AM
    Wow, Nigel....the admiration, the love in this poem flows like a veil of water ...I love the way your wonderful words cascade with such passion. You are one passionate poet, it ripples from your work! Lovely,lovely! Carrie

  1. Date: 11/1/2008 6:28:00 AM
    Yikes. What an awesome tribute to someone incredibly special. Truly magnificent and breathtaking and several other adjectives that come to mind all wondrous. This is a work of art. A masterpiece. Love, Shar

  1. Date: 11/1/2008 4:11:00 AM
    You know, of course, that this is fabulous, right? I think it is your best yet. Amazing, and I really love the shape. It flows like a soft waterfall. You know I will have to put this in my faves. You sure can take the breath from someone.LOL Your far away friend, Christie