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Pique Nique

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© G.V. 07-22-2013,
© G.V. 08-21-2013 all rights reserved
(Iambic pentameter)

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Pique Nique

Enchanting is the beauty of her pic
he reckons if they tried the night to guile,
she would become a pique nique exotique
anthology of verse to read worthwhile.

What Coppertone's epoque, deep tan invites
whereon his tasting buds should ever trace
poetic cuisine's discourse fourthright
his foreign language will reach touch base.

Shan't ever inspirations lead his flight
above the sweetness of her warm eyes' hue
hors d'oeuvres' delicacy and choice of sight
a connoisseur of arts should taste fondue.

© G.V., 08-21-2013

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  1. Date: 9/4/2013 2:49:00 PM
    Great poem, I love it. Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem..... Lucilla

  1. Date: 8/29/2013 11:42:00 PM
    lovely images that truly deserves a great win, dear G.. congrats and bravo!..;) huggs

  1. Date: 8/29/2013 11:13:00 AM
    Congrats on your winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 8/29/2013 9:17:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Craig Cornish's contest, Giorgio. It was a delight to read it, and as always I am vowed and inspired by your verses. Have a wonderful weekend and best wishes. Peace & Love, Andrew.

  1. Date: 8/29/2013 12:46:00 AM
    Thanks to all! Coppertone smiles! :)

  1. Date: 8/28/2013 9:32:00 AM
    Good morning G... :-) a wonderful job and contest this has been... thanks for always being good to me.... hugs... Linda

  1. Date: 8/28/2013 7:32:00 AM
    Well done and skillful piece of work, congratulations.

  1. Date: 8/28/2013 6:00:00 AM
    Thanks to all! Many smiles! :) G.

  1. Date: 8/27/2013 6:28:00 PM
    congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 8/27/2013 6:25:00 PM
    Congrats to you on your win. Morgan

  1. Date: 8/27/2013 4:36:00 PM
    Love the what coppertone deep tan invites line....and the whole poem....outstanding....congratulations.... :-)

  1. Date: 8/27/2013 3:46:00 PM
    Iambic took the more difficult form, upside down or right-side up...... this was a winner!

  1. Date: 8/27/2013 1:50:00 PM
    Your poetry is always enchanting congrats G, xxx

  1. Date: 8/27/2013 1:26:00 PM
    Georgio, thanks so much for your very original and talented entry!

  1. Date: 8/25/2013 10:16:00 AM
    I never read anything like this before. It is good and I enjoyed it. thanks for sharing and for reading my poems. Good luck in the contest...... Lucilla

  1. Date: 8/23/2013 7:58:00 PM
    Lovely style! If I may.."exotique". Thank you for my honored placement in your contest Giorgio...Hugs, Maggie Mae

  1. Date: 8/23/2013 10:45:00 AM
    Your poetry is delicious like fondue and good art, a melting moment and my senses reel, I merrily enjoyed this Giorgio xxx

  1. Date: 8/23/2013 10:17:00 AM
    this is a beautiful poem, both front and back...just simply perfect! thanks for believing my shades of blue was worthy of a win...I am honored :)

  1. Date: 8/23/2013 9:52:00 AM
    Like the masters of old, your poem echoes the style of great poetry. Quite and achievement.

  1. Date: 8/23/2013 9:20:00 AM
    I'll eat my hat if this doesn't win Craig over! Not only form, but the unique beauty in which you matters not up-down, backwards -forwards....there is always beauty in your verse. To thank you for the honor in your Triolet contest, no way can I compare to your own talents, but it means so much coming from a true poet of PS......thank you very much!