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Below is the poem entitled PHANTOM OF MY INSANITY which was written by poet DENISE NARAYADU. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.



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An unsuspecting faithless visionary 
Conceived by an eclipse most voluntary

A creation of it's unequivocal delusion
Yet it's direction remains constant for submission

Deceived into false paradise
But its creator stands victimized

Vapid attitude charming its prey
Manipulating gratitude evoking disarray

Blindfolded by my adversity
He is forgetful of my diversity

Resembling the Phantom of my insanity
Imprudently demanding exuberant gravity

Remembering my crude perception
Forbidding my master with my flammable deception

As the Phantom of my insanity was released from within
Being indulgent in my fortitude and freed from his sin.

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  1. Date: 12/24/2013 7:49:00 AM
    Once again I think I find a lot of meaning in your words. I often read poetry, especially poetry that I know is personal, or from personal experience looking to discover the psychology behind the it. It's just a natural tendency stemming from my interest and study in the social sciences, especially philosophy, then psychology. I find many psychological/emotional aspects to your poetry. I wonder if this comes from self awareness or great perception. Wonderful as always, thanks for sharing.

  1. Date: 12/12/2013 12:27:00 AM
    Beautifully crafted!!!

  1. Date: 11/4/2013 1:08:00 AM
    What an abstract design you have here, very nice -Good Job!!! MC

  1. Date: 11/2/2013 6:20:00 PM
    Such a good write, Denise! Welcome to poetry soup! Consider me your new souper-friend! Take care and be blessed! Love,love,love! :-) - Den

  1. Date: 11/2/2013 10:38:00 AM
    Denise, dang woman! lol THAT was good! Please look into my I Spit Fire contest and see if you would like to enter something; I think you would be quite capable ;)