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Below is the poem entitled PADDY SMELL which was written by poet FABIYAS M V. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Nostrils are the steps to soul.
Paddy farm, just reaped, smells.
Same old unique smells
Climb up the attic of soul.

Full soul shines in silver
Above the leaves tide.
....Footfalls of cat eyed maid
With a pot on her shoulder.

On embankment in field,
Her anklet resonates.
Old untouched love beats,
Then my soul gets wild.

On solitude smells paddy,
Old white skirt flutters
Below black blouse hers:
Truly soul smells paddy.

written on 02/03/11)

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  1. Date: 5/31/2012 6:54:00 AM
    I have not been on the soup for almost a week to read and comment. I have enjoyed being able to read your poetry this morning. I wanted to stop by to thank you for the comments you made during my absence from the soup. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment Fab. Love, Carol"

  1. Date: 6/11/2011 3:01:00 PM
    enjoyed the feel of this Fabiyas, and thank you for commenting on the winning write of mine.

  1. Date: 4/10/2011 9:22:00 AM
    Very interesting poem, Fabiyas and I like the analogy here as well :) Have a wonderful week :)

  1. Date: 3/12/2011 9:43:00 PM

  1. Date: 3/3/2011 9:52:00 AM
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  1. Date: 3/3/2011 9:50:00 AM
    :) Thanks for supporting the contest, Fabiyas! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 3/2/2011 11:32:00 PM
    Very interesting the things of your culture brought into this one , Fabiyas, Nice descriptiion of the woman in this poem.

  1. Date: 3/2/2011 4:47:00 PM
    Awesome the way you describe the "paddy smell" of the woman's soul. Our souls can be bright lights at times, glowing with purity, but this is a terrific analogy of a soul that has been lost in the paddy. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 3/2/2011 3:13:00 PM
    beautiful personification , the expressions lures to visit India soon, Fabiyas. I hope you are fine, not much seen, nowadays.

  1. Date: 3/2/2011 6:46:00 AM
    Fabiyas - The fragrance of freshly harvested paddy nicely portryed. Thnx for reading my verse "Queen of Hearts " and leaving inspiring comments. Luv & best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

  1. Date: 3/2/2011 5:17:00 AM
    Such sweet lines of tender luv FABIYAS and luv your rhyme scheme..very interesting my friend and so unique to this piece.. enjoyed with luv..

  1. Date: 3/2/2011 4:24:00 AM
    Interesting work..Not sure about the interpertation..Paddy is a place where animals are kept right...Thanks for your kind review of my work..Sara

  1. Date: 3/2/2011 1:14:00 AM
    descriptive images prancing all over the lines... great use of enrgetic alliteration, fabiyas.. good luck! :) huggs, nette

  1. Date: 3/2/2011 1:14:00 AM
    descriptive images prancing all over the lines... great use of enrgetic alliteration, fabiyas.. good luck! :) huggs, nette