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Below is the poem entitled OUR TWILIGHT LORE-- EMPAT POETRY which was written by poet nette onclaud. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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As starlit night glows half-lit cast To glaze breath’s fire beneath the seam And paint oiled hues ‘pon river glassed That spills through love’s easel, agleam You covet deep my twilight Iore As starlit night glows half-lit cast Igniting air, blown from seashore Where ruffled lips hold flames steadfast On lyre, your song; from crescent passed This dreamlike invocation sung As starlit night glows half-lit cast For sequels new through days prolonged Westward the fondling embers speak Of colored lifetime unsurpassed Moon plays witness to hearts' mystique As starlit night glows half-lit cast Incurable Romantic Contest: Kim Morrison by nette onclaud
* Empat poetry form : old rhyming verse from Malaysia. Rhyme Scheme: 8 -10 syllables per line A. b. a. b. c. A. c. a. a. d. A. d. e. a. e. A.

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  1. Date: 5/23/2013 9:02:00 AM
    A melodious poem here!Good to know this new form of poertry.

  1. Date: 5/22/2013 9:24:00 PM
    Oh, this one is dreamy... LOVE the ruffled lips... I can barely read, my eyes are blurring... long day. :D Back to you, this is sure to place way up there, it has it all... language, orginality, light sensuality... a sigh maker. Hugs to you sweet chum... hoping your allergies are improving... hugs and love sent, Cyndi

  1. Date: 5/22/2013 8:04:00 PM
    Stunningly vibrant and beautiful, as always Miss Nette. Not surprised to find you still penning wonderful poetry. Glad to see it.

  1. Date: 5/22/2013 7:52:00 PM
    This just shows how incurable of a romantic you really are my friend, such a lovely poem this write truly is my friend! I am in awe of the splendor of this piece Nette, you have delivered a powerful and inspiring write, I loved reading this delightful poem this evening, Great Work!!

    Sivey Avatar Russell Sivey
    Date: 5/22/2013 7:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Is this form like the Quatern? I like this form, it isn't as easy as it looks, I have done a few Quaterns in my time! You have expertly done this form, the Empat...I will look to try it now!
  1. Date: 5/22/2013 6:12:00 PM
    I don't believe it is possible for you to write a bad poem, they all turn out like this one, Spectacular, I much enjoyed it, xxxx

  1. Date: 5/22/2013 3:37:00 PM
    Astounding flow & energy from this. Playing towards heartstrings' content...

  1. Date: 5/22/2013 3:12:00 PM
    I love the feel of this one, it almost feels medieval, not so much Malasian. I also wanted to thank you for your comment, it really touched me. I can feel you are a very warm and spiritual person. Hugs Rick

  1. Date: 5/22/2013 3:06:00 PM
    Introduction to a new form..Interesting work..Reads like a winner in the contest to me..Thanks for your visit to my work..Sara

  1. Date: 5/22/2013 12:47:00 PM
    - Adorable ..... Who can avoid getting romantic thoughts after reading this .... - Luck in contest !!!!!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 5/22/2013 12:31:00 PM
    You never cease to amaze my friend...I just copy/pasted this so I can study your rhyme scheme...You got a winner here! - Tim