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Orietta Song

Today your brown eyes sneak in my pockets to hide from my desire.
Your black hair comb through my surprise faster my step.
Please stop my gaze from shimmering from your lips.
The legs which you have, move in my wind.

I look for my tears when I walk by your side,
Tabled by my search when your lost from my thoughts,
Serene is my enemy when you walk from my distance.
Sleep jump  from life, when I look for your hand.

Out of your chest, staged for tonight.
This shatter is crippled by hope and dampen by the cuddle of your walk,
Tackling with the watchful look of your touch,
Bevy with the stain from your lips.

Will I see the eyes that provoked my obsession.
Look for me when you dream of tomorrow and you wish for today.
 My escape is your loving touch, dress with your kind stare.

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  1. Date: 11/26/2013 2:15:00 AM
    These eyes of yours my dear...

  1. Date: 9/23/2013 5:08:00 PM
    Your poems evoke tenderness & sincerity, deep emotions displayed in every line. I love reading from you:0).cherie

  1. Date: 8/9/2013 12:03:00 PM
    Tnks for your honest comnent upon my post..B-) Im glad you enjoyed reading the poem for my mother..I see her growing older and it scares me.I came here not because of the pic..though i do like the painting..I came to read your poem and these verses touch the soft spot of my heart.Very sentimental and evokes so much emotion ,especially the last three lines.Well penned Sean...Beautiful!!!

  1. Date: 8/1/2013 5:02:00 PM
    Very passionate work..Enjoyed reading this one today..Sara

  1. Date: 7/31/2013 7:04:00 AM
    Stunning poem. I love your phrasing and the images you create

  1. Date: 7/9/2013 5:17:00 PM
    I do love the way you put this together. Look for me when you dream of tomorrow and you wish for today. nice line ;} ,,,,, Yes my MASSACRE could go on and on ;} thanks for reading it . always Debbie .

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 11:12:00 AM
    I'm loving the last stanza, especially the last line! Annalise