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Only You....

 in the aromatic silence
         flowers scent the air
candle flicker glimmers
        supple soft shimmers
of pale tangerine 
      and swirls of pale rose 

in long slow sensuous moves
yes…soft compliant stretches
I lay supplicant on satin sheets
      I await you, my love

in the moonlight in moans
        I plead for you

    hair in erratic disarray
  rusty tendrils fall unruly....
         and body taut
    in love stricken passion 
      drugged still seconds
        my breath caught
          I long for you 
I pine for your dominant eyes

   touch me on a bed of blue
       whisper those words
             “I love you:”
 and trace your tender hands
          down this body
   starved like a hungry cat
                for you
that’s right…..only you will do

      just you can ease the agony
            and just and only you
can wreck such havoc on my hungry heart
 wretched from the pain of loving you

you break me and make me
     feral rivers of tender petals
                 hot lava and liquid lust
particles of me lost in storm tossed dust

by your own creation
           I became your slave
in breathless bondage
chained to you…..weak and wanting
          (a heady thrill)

my tongue so parched I  thirst for you
       quaff from the lake of you
        dark and brooding… you
your primitive eagle spirit draws me
     like a fluttering helpless moth
drawn inexorably to your raw flames

        can you feel me my love?

         your body I worship
              and I wait….
        tied up here….I wait…..
           for just and only you

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  1. Date: 6/18/2009 11:59:00 PM
    That first is superb image poetry Christie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

  1. Date: 6/10/2009 11:48:00 PM
    What a talented poet you are Christie.Keep sharing with Ps.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.

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  1. Date: 4/19/2009 1:21:00 AM
    Thank you for your welcome comments today Christie.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 4/15/2009 4:43:00 PM
    wow this is hotter than a cup of java... love your use of metaphors...Love and Light.... LaBella

  1. Date: 4/12/2009 6:23:00 AM
    wow....this is an outstanding write! "hot lava and liquid lust particles of me lost in storm tossed dust" this is just an amazing way to describe what you are feeling and doing...just great!...also thank you for all of your kind comments on my poems...again this is just a breathtaking peice...~Luke

  1. Date: 3/26/2009 12:46:00 PM
    What a passionate write, Christie! I like the way you describe one who is longing for love. Well done!

  1. Date: 3/25/2009 5:15:00 PM
    Christie...this is an amazing erotic love poem. Full of so much passion...I agree with Colin your words are truly incredible...this would have made Neruda blush. What a lucky man who has deserved this gem. -Jason

  1. Date: 3/25/2009 4:05:00 PM
    Hi Christie... your talent continues to astound me... I do not think I have ever read a more tenderly erotic poem than this one ... it is incredible how you find and paint with words and how they seem to be flowing straight from your soul.... any man, this lucky man of whom you speak... would indeed be greatly honored.. always impressive Christie. ps ... thank you so much for your comments.... Col :)

  1. Date: 3/25/2009 1:49:00 PM
    I wish this poem was written for me, but I am too mortal. This is no less than love poured as a tribute to a god. It commands worship, God bless you

  1. Date: 3/25/2009 1:21:00 PM
    Christie, ok, I need to know exactly what you are eating and/or what supplements you are taking. I want to feel like you do, and write like you do! You've got every guy running for the showers! : ) And on a serious note, wow, is this super hot, passionate and focused on some one special dude, that's for sure. I think. Unless he is your fantasy. Well, either way, it works. Amazing lines that seem to flow from your core. Outstanding. Love, Shar

  1. Date: 3/25/2009 11:55:00 AM
    Whoa, I don’t smoke but it feels like I need a cigarette after reading this, erotic passion nicely penned, great job...Raul

  1. Date: 3/25/2009 9:40:00 AM
    Another excellent poem for your Love anthology Christie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

  1. Date: 3/25/2009 9:33:00 AM
    Very passionate deep write, filled with your most intimate and private feelings of love and desire. Incredible imagery leaving the reader like- Whoa....Wow and Double wow..This is a Masterpiece...Excellent Job, GB Tyesha

  1. Date: 3/25/2009 7:56:00 AM
    I'm outta here, it's time for a cold shower, I'm afraid, or I might succumb to heat stroke!!! LOL Fred

  1. Date: 3/25/2009 7:53:00 AM
    The heat has been turned on to high this morning....!! (You certainly got Christophe's attentiion!:) I agree....someone should sign you on for a book deal!! Great job, Christie!!~love, Carrie

  1. Date: 3/25/2009 7:45:00 AM
    guest who is coming to dinner ... okay what's going on the soup ... these are big beautiful windows through the front doors of the soul ... what lies inside? It does not matter now, beauty is beauty, Love to you, Christie.

  1. Date: 3/25/2009 7:42:00 AM
    strong passionate and fully charged.. you are loaded with this piece today very well penned

  1. Date: 3/25/2009 6:22:00 AM
    Very passionate and expressed write of love and longings deepest desire! Penned so eloquently as only but a few as you yourself can do, dear lovely and gifted Christie Moses!:) Filled with wonderully depthful images and thoughts of the heart! Very wonderful write dear lady!:) My love to You and Brainna, John!:)

  1. Date: 3/25/2009 6:15:00 AM
    I just wiped the sweat from my brow and drank a gallon of water to cool off...I was out of breath at the cat line..i began starving for the action this write passion/love/sex in make believe well...damn..somebody get this child a book deal....