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One Mind,One Arrow and No Heart

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One Mind,One Arrow and No Heart

My Beloved,

You may come back tomorrow but No ,I won't be here,
cos i made up my mind,for you i shall not care..

My Pillow shall not Hug another tear,My Misty Vision very clear.
Baby ,Its all over now,all that's been so very dear.

It was You ,who made me take this decision which is so very hard,
You were the one who left Me lonely,Now it is My time to part.

and If Passion comes knocking in ardent Flames Of You,
My Mind knows how to convince Her,Saying,You were never true.

and if My Soul comes knocking ,Haunted by the name of You,
My Mind knows  how to convince her,Saying you made me feel so blue.

and if My Memory comes knocking,A reminder of Our Sweetest Dreams,
My Mind Knows how to convince Her,Saying,You drowned  Dreams in Streams.

and if My Eyes come knocking,Gazing in Your deep Chocolate brown eyes,
My Mind  knows how to convince them,Saying Blue,Green Eyes are twice as nice.

and if Your Smiles come knocking,Crossing all over the Miles,
My Mind Knows how to convince Me,Yesterday,Smiles Meant  Sad Goodbyes.

and if  Your Verses come knocking,dancing in Tango Romance,
My Mind knows how to convince me,You held Other ladies'Hands.

and if Your Songs come knocking,in  lyrics of Loving Amor,
My Mind Knows how to convince me,You're an actor,nothing more.

and if you come with Daises in your hands,standing On my Welcome Carpet 
My Mind knows how to convince me ,Only Roses make my Heart beat.

                                                                                              (New Me)


Copyright © Charmaine Chircop

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  1. Date: 12/1/2009 11:04:00 PM
    Thats one mind with a quiver of arrows,leaving behind a bloodless heart.A well worked out piece.I pity that mind you left in a grind.I'm putting this to my favourite's. God Bless....PRINCE

  1. Date: 12/1/2009 3:40:00 AM
    Nicely done on the topic of getting control of your life. Keep the magic pen flowing. Thanks for the comments on my work. Sara

  1. Date: 11/30/2009 6:17:00 PM
    Very touching Charmaine,...yet whom ever this ex is of yours,...when he looks at your picture,.....and sometime soon,..he'll notice those eyes which I've seen,..their warm glow,...he will rush back home with salty tears,..and your arms will bask in his running sweat ! *smiles* Great write Charmaine ! james

  1. Date: 11/30/2009 7:28:00 AM
    I think the beloved could get confused here....The poor guy...This one says goodbye while the one from the day before was full of loss and wondering if he still thought of her...You ladies are just big riddles :) is soo hard to shut love off when it's true, so with that, good luck to you......

  1. Date: 11/29/2009 7:45:00 AM
    wow, a compelling poem i must say. i know this all too well for i have broken hearts and had mine broken too. it took me back to some memories i long forgotten, but good ones at that. :) also thank you for your comment. i am glad you enjoyed my poem as well. one thing i know is love is always around the corner. it's just a matter of bumping into him or her. -again thank you charma dear, Jason

  1. Date: 11/29/2009 7:08:00 AM
    Dear Charma, passionate, emotional piece of poetry from your creative pen this Sunday I am reading... "my pillow shall not hug another tear" .. such a line of triumph .. bravo dear friend for an excellent write .... and thankxxx for luving my The Legend... glad u had a good laugh and can relate to those times when it occurred for us to deal with ... growth happens after the legends pass onto other innocents... blessings .. luv... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetie"

  1. Date: 11/29/2009 5:45:00 AM
    Lovely writing, has a very sing-song type rhythm to it - almost lyrical. Such sadness withing, keep that pen dancing! Thanks for your lovely comments...Anna-marie.

  1. Date: 11/28/2009 10:40:00 PM
    Charma, Methinks the lady doth protest too much. Nevertheless, if he caused you to feel this way, kick him to the curb and forget him. Fools deserve the scorn they receive. Thanks for your kind words on my stuff. Love, Will

  1. Date: 11/28/2009 6:58:00 PM
    Charma...nice poem....Soup mail!

  1. Date: 11/28/2009 2:34:00 PM
    Sounds like the new me has it all under control.Smile. Sincerely, Moses

  1. Date: 11/28/2009 11:31:00 AM
    Excellent piece Charmaine, you have a most lovely talent, and we are all so happy that you share it with us >> The Highlander, the Invernessian called James

  1. Date: 11/28/2009 11:20:00 AM
    deep very deep and very good. i know a lot of people that can use this including myself. i'll have to put it somewhere were i wont lose it. yours John Henry Loving III

  1. Date: 11/28/2009 8:03:00 AM
    This one is full of passion dear Charma.... The first poem of the day is a great one....I am glad I decided to come see you first.......:JP]