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On the Side-Walks: Ninette

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On the Side-Walks: Ninette


Still on foot unwelcomed Unending path going to nowhere next to a road on the side alone walks
My first Ninette. .

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  1. Date: 4/8/2014 2:21:00 PM
    This is short, but very nice. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla

  1. Date: 3/29/2012 10:23:00 PM
    thanks as always for your welcomed comments here!!

  1. Date: 3/29/2012 10:23:00 PM
    Hey Ruben, I need a new one!! Was hoping to congratulate this one, but no cigar? Hmmm, I had not seen it earlier. I really like the topic you chose, an unending and unwelcomed path. I think it is a symbolism for life or how we feel time to time!

  1. Date: 3/27/2012 1:01:00 PM
    This left me pondering, Ruben-- sometimes I feel like I just keep walking with no destination in mind-- shucks I wander--really like this ninette of yours :D! btw thanks for dropping by my blog! You are not yet too late!! Earth hour is on March 31, 830pm your time :D

  1. Date: 3/27/2012 3:23:00 AM
    Ah yes I walk with my dogs and my God often. It's at this time I can commune with Him and He eases my stress. Great job here. God Bless, JB

  1. Date: 3/24/2012 12:16:00 PM
    I'm not sure I understand this. I do however, get a certain emotion out of it - loneliness, although i know alone doesn't necessarily mean lonely. is this what you were going for? a sort of lost feeling? please forgive my ignorance!

  1. Date: 3/24/2012 7:20:00 AM
    Always take the road less traveled Ru..Awesome 1st Ninette..Ill have to try one tomorrow xx Hugs

  1. Date: 3/24/2012 12:08:00 AM
    a side road to nowhere..and still walking the unending path.Interesting form Ruben..

  1. Date: 3/23/2012 2:00:00 PM
    Reads like a winner..I need to look this contest up and see what these Ninette consist of..Good luck in Joan's contest..Thanks for the many stops at my work..Your comments are so uplifting...Sara

  1. Date: 3/23/2012 1:28:00 AM
    That can be an unending road, going nowhere hey. Enjoyed your first Ninette, I have to give this form a try sometime :)

  1. Date: 3/22/2012 5:47:00 PM
    it's wonderful! the way you cut the words makes the point stands out.

  1. Date: 3/22/2012 4:39:00 PM
    Heya Ruben! I didn't know u wrote your first ninette today either! This is amazing stuff...almost like a reverse osmosis! Come read mine...even if it really stinks! ...Gwendolen

  1. Date: 3/22/2012 3:18:00 PM
    Yeah...a profound write here Ruben...enjoyed.Best wishes.

  1. Date: 3/22/2012 1:09:00 AM
    I am loving these ninettes and yours is great, Ruben. The unending path going to nowhere is a lonely path...poignant words. Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 3/21/2012 9:28:00 PM
    So its 1/2/3/4/5/4/3/2/1 ?.. I had never written a ninette..Maybe i wll try it out one time..You did great with this form.You transmitted a deep message through very few words 'unending path going to nowhere'.. Yes.. that's profound Ruben..Charma

    O. Avatar Ruben O.
    Date: 3/22/2012 3:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Chircop  Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 3/22/2012 9:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I can't think right now ....I have a blocked nose and a blocked mind!
    O. Avatar Ruben O.
    Date: 3/21/2012 9:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Try it now! : )