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On The Edge Of A Dream

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On The Edge Of A Dream

An opaline dream: the room is a pearl filled bowl and moonstone-moulded. Bright beads of day roll away; night is crystal-crowned with stars.
for Andrea's 'A Catch-Phrase Dazzler' contest

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  1. Date: 4/18/2014 8:42:00 PM
    Beautiful words spinning beautiful thoughts. Love your writing, Charlotte.

  1. Date: 2/28/2014 12:59:00 PM
    This sounds like a dream.

  1. Date: 2/18/2014 6:29:00 AM
    Charlotte, 1st. thanks for visiting, i'm sometimes confused with poem categories, thanks for idea! i changed it....2nd. this cool a fan of indigenous pearls, acquired by my friends, Nadine and Burl, of River City Pearls, in Alma Wisconsin....she crafts (paints too!) jewelry from the last cache of pearls form the bygone Mississippi Clams of the first. 1/2 of the 20th.(decimated by zebra mussel invasion) century, when Chinese Button Factories thrived in the area (you can still see remnants!) love this poem and all it evokes in me! jimbo

  1. Date: 1/25/2013 7:06:00 AM
    How did I miss this gorgeous winner in Andrea's contest?! The imagery here is outstanding. Opals and moonstones are my favourite stones, so I especially love "opaline dream" and "moonstone-moulded." (P.S. Thank you for your sweet comment on my poem about Canadian poets - It made me smile!)

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 9:27:00 AM
    Simply beautiful dear..Charma

  1. Date: 1/17/2013 9:55:00 AM
    Belated congrats! A beautiful poem you have here :)

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 1:54:00 AM
    Belated congratulations on your winning spot Charlotte xx

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 11:13:00 PM
    very nice win ;}

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 6:13:00 PM
    Congrad's to a rising star of Poetry Soup. Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 8:03:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win, Charlotte. The images are very vivid. Thank you for your kind comment on my tanka. Re a personal poem: A tanka (as I understand it) is an observation, which brings to mind personal experience/time/place/situation, thereby making it often sound disjointed...It's wholy subjective; oposed to a haiku which is objective. Love, Su

    Richards Avatar Suzette Richards
    Date: 1/8/2013 2:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Tanka has been likened to singing the blues and, also, to an entry in a personal diary. :-) It is one of my favourite poetry forms.
  1. Date: 1/7/2013 5:54:00 PM
    Yayyyy, now I can come to it and say to you BIG congratulations on your second place win. It was truly worthy. the images were outstanding.

  1. Date: 1/7/2013 12:10:00 PM
    Rompole of the Baily for the defense.

  1. Date: 1/5/2013 12:18:00 PM
    A visual delight.

  1. Date: 1/4/2013 8:43:00 AM
    Charlotte love this, good luck...David