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November Nightfall

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November Nightfall

Nadir of this momentous year is reached.
Ominous opaque shapes shift in tightly locked rooms;
valediction of autumn's colour-crackling leaves.
Encroaching shadows approach with soot-soft stealth,
mysteriously merging, emerging from clouded corners -
bleak charcoal smudges menacing in murky light.
Endless darkness unravelling all around me;
rooms in my mind painted every shade of night.

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  1. Date: 9/8/2011 12:01:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win. Interesting take on fall, amazing to see how fall is described by everyone. This one is a real original. Well done. Lee

  1. Date: 9/7/2011 10:02:00 PM
    Congratulations on the win in the contest of carol,Charlotte

  1. Date: 9/7/2011 9:57:00 PM
    oooooooooooh, marvelous! Soot-soft is brilliant, and it all leads to the last stellar line- This is one of my favourites in this contest. Congrats on the win! Cyndi

  1. Date: 9/7/2011 9:10:00 PM
    Charlette, Great poem. Congratulations on your worthy poem's third place. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 9/7/2011 7:38:00 PM
    Congrats on your winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 9/7/2011 2:08:00 PM
    hey Charlotte congrats on your win, loved every word of it..David

  1. Date: 9/7/2011 1:47:00 PM
    Very cool, almost spooky approach to November with the shadows, ominous opaque shapes and charcoal smudges. Excellent acrostic, Charlotte! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 9/7/2011 1:27:00 PM
    oh charlotte...… a happy blast of CHEERS to you for the great win..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 9/7/2011 11:19:00 AM
    Congrats Charlotte on third place win with this cool write on Fall so lovely ...luv..

  1. Date: 9/7/2011 11:18:00 AM
    Congratulations on your placement in the "FALL IS AROUND THE CORNER" poetry contest sponsored by Carol Brown. CR

  1. Date: 9/7/2011 10:45:00 AM
    Congratulations on your placement in my contest Charlotte. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/3/2011 5:21:00 PM
    Love the B-Line! An amazing accomplishment to grasp the context and nature of this distant month. Another fine and brilliant entry and I must say I am so happy I came across this beautiful poetry of yours Charlotte. I enjoyed reading your work and shall return to read more. You write with such a peaceful pen!

  1. Date: 9/2/2011 7:19:00 AM
    Thank you for supporting my contest Charlotte. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/2/2011 2:34:00 AM
    yes, it is like this, charlotte you sure captured the essence of this month, my least favorite of the season! But you made it lovely by describing it with your vivid words!