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Nimbus moon

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© G. V. 08.23.2013 All rights reserved
© G. V. 06.26.2012 All rights reserved
(Iambic tetrameter)
The poem is a rendition of an older one of mine, called "Pier Four"

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Nimbus moon

The north winds blow on loners' date,
it's cold on fingertips and dark,
night's owls resemble souls that hark,
- we met in life, one verse too late.

The clouds are gray, soul's sermon clogs
alone I wait on rain's frontier,
and breathe this void - alive once Pier,
whereon you smiled at winter fogs.

And it is strange to feel you there,
you never left the winds' lone call;
I feel the flow in veins to haul,
a string of tales - nostalgic fare.

And you appear - a wraith in mind,
that distant smiles with lonely eyes,
gray clouds and snow from low hung skies,
- how doleful meet our dusks and twine!

The night ascribes - pure quilt of snow,
so much quietness falls and dearth,
regales the emptiness of earth
and solitude of our time's tow.

The nimbus moon won't spring to fore,
but if you show, my hope will shine,
a conferred love will wave to mine,
bloom scented winds will reach Pier Four.

© G. V. 08.23.2013 All rights reserved
(Iambic tetrameter)

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  1. Date: 8/29/2013 9:54:00 AM
    Bravo Georgio!

  1. Date: 8/29/2013 12:53:00 AM
    Amazing piece of work....looking for more :) A~D

  1. Date: 8/26/2013 11:56:00 AM
    this is simply smashing, G... you just float with imagery and finesse..:) hugggs

  1. Date: 8/25/2013 10:19:00 AM
    This is beautiful and very well written. Thanks for sharing..... lUCILLA

  1. Date: 8/23/2013 3:04:00 PM
    I loved the flow in this poem..'We came in life one verse too late'-So besutiful and somehow melanchonic..'And you sppear with wrath in mind/thst distant smiles with lonely eyes-So touched by such words..and then the last stanza so beautiful..with a scent of hope.Ofcourse to my favs.Im in love with your nimbus moon..First time heard the moon described this way.Tnks for reading my humble.verses too- Charma B-)