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Night Unknown 1

Night unknown

At the wheel
At night. Uneasy feel.
Narrow misses, though,  in nobody’s midst.

Rows of reflectors mark lanes glaring through the mist.
Comforting  coolness and sultry night coexist

Cell  service zones change ,ding dongs the phone
Heart  fluttering  alone
Night  unknown.

S.Jagathsimhan Nair
Form: Trois-par-huit(Octa-Tri)
For 'Night Melody contest'

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  1. Date: 8/22/2012 1:37:00 PM
    Life seems to stop when the phone rings, talk about priorities! Sounds like you've been there. Great one for the contest; all the best!

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 5:43:00 PM
    love your rhymes Jag,great write

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 3:56:00 PM
    Smashing in it's form and metaphors! Places audience beside u in the seat.....very well written!

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 1:55:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your creative work..I wonder what the call was about..I am glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon..Sara

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 10:53:00 AM
    This reads to me a scene straight out of a thriller movie. Very well narrated, liked the cell services part a lot. It was nicely thought out. Good luck with the contest.

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 9:16:00 AM
    eerie but good like it Jag xx