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Below is the poem entitled Nicholas which was written by poet Dana Smith. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Pluck your soft and gentle strums, Forcing out your fading hums Sing forgotton words, now empty, That used to tug my tears a plenty Whisper through soft lips, the truth, Awakening your dying youth Words of saddening emptiness, Between the Bars, just one more kiss Mumbling lyrics, fumbling strums, Forcing out the softest hums Brush the air with every breath, Until all sound is put to death

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  1. Date: 10/10/2011 12:51:00 AM
    Beautiful Dana, soft and so lovely - enjoyed so much. :)

  1. Date: 10/8/2011 9:46:00 AM
    enjoyed your sad emotive write!

  1. Date: 10/7/2011 8:16:00 PM
    good advice. thanks~N