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Nature's Design

The rain comes through my window
And I open up my eyes
Two pairs of shoes beside my bed
And one of them's not mine

A silhouette across the room 
Is smiling ear to ear 
Her flirting voice reminds me
Of the things that happened here

My soul was just a tag along 
And there was no provision 
To bring to heel my body 
As it made its own decisions 

If we could know what lies were told
Then maybe we'd forgive  
But life is taking prisoners 
Just to make sure that it lives

 By: Kyle Ezra Kriticos

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  1. Date: 11/27/2013 12:50:00 AM
    hey Kyle, , Thank you for spreading and sharing your kindness. You know me I’ will always enjoy stopping by with love and support, no matter if I do not Understand what I am reading at times. I am very grateful and thankful to all who have been supportive of me one way or another. Your heartfelt words are the main attraction of who you are… Thanks for your inspiring visit. ----- Happy Thanksgiving ~ LINDA

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 8:44:00 PM
    Kyle, a very nice smile to wake up tooo... love the passion and reason your body find with her... excellent...LINDA

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 4:47:00 PM
    The last stanza is awesome!! Love this Kyyyle

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 9:59:00 PM
    I absolutely love this. It reminds me of a light fairy tale told from the mind of an older child. Very nicely done -ARI