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My True Beauty

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My True Beauty

Eyes brown
Knowing intelligent
Brunette hair
Following behind 
As you run
Gentle loving
Enjoying others

Legs and hips
Most beautiful 
I've seen
Could sculpt

You turn around
Well shaped rear
Tail swishing 

To flick
Away the

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  1. Date: 3/24/2013 7:58:00 PM
    What a filly .... Love the surpise ending.

  1. Date: 3/21/2013 10:16:00 PM
    Beautifully done, simple and elegant. Congratulations. Jack

  1. Date: 3/20/2013 6:23:00 PM
    Congrats. Rick...:-) great job

  1. Date: 3/20/2013 4:03:00 PM
    Love it Rick, love the perfect twist!!

  1. Date: 3/20/2013 3:22:00 PM
    Congrats on your win... A.O

  1. Date: 3/20/2013 10:51:00 AM
    Nice twist, Rick. I like to do this in my poems, too. Great win! Congratulations.

  1. Date: 3/20/2013 7:30:00 AM
    A really wonderful piece, Rick! Congrats for your deserved win!

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 5:42:00 PM
    Hi Rick, your poem is lovely... congratulations with your winning poem~ always* PD

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 11:00:00 AM
    You caught me off guard with this. The first couple descriptions could have been used to describe a woman, lol! I've never been around many horses but they have always seemed like such noble beasts. And I can see how much you love them by reading this... great work!

    Zablocki Avatar Rick Zablocki
    Date: 3/13/2013 11:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Timothy.