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My Superman Kite

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My Superman Kite

                                               and fast
                                            man of steel
                                         trying to escape
                                       and fly free for real
                                   darting to and fro quickly
                                pulling and circling and diving
                            i hold tight as his cape and mighty  
                           fist pointed high, finally climb to the
                            bright noon sky—no bird or plane
                              is this that flies—it’s superman.
                                the wind whips and snaps
                                   hard against his chest
                                       and I wish I could 
                                          ride there and
                                             look down
                                               upon me

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  1. Date: 10/11/2014 8:48:00 PM
    Craig congrats on your placement. It is a very creative and clever write. Well done! kriver

  1. Date: 10/10/2014 9:26:00 AM
    Your work is ingenious! It would take me lifetimes to accomplish such a feat! Lol. Congratulations to your wonderful work Craig! :-)

  1. Date: 10/9/2014 7:56:00 PM
    You're kite flies high today, congrats on your 1st place win Craig xxx

  1. Date: 10/9/2014 2:00:00 PM
    Old memories well told, Craig. Congratulations! Cheers, Roy

  1. Date: 10/9/2014 1:57:00 PM
    This is the best in my books, above and beyond what the challenge called for. CONGRATULATIONS on your win, you should be flying high as a kite.

  1. Date: 3/29/2014 4:41:00 PM
    Ha, I so love the kite this and the one Flo wrote are my fav. Craig, CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN..... Awesome poem!! Luv ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 3/24/2014 7:30:00 AM
    Super man. Congrats on your win

  1. Date: 3/23/2014 9:21:00 PM
    Whoa.. This is what AWESOME looks like! Congrats!!

  1. Date: 3/23/2014 7:39:00 PM
    Excellent Kite for Superman, Craig, glad to see you have poetry fun, congratulations on your win!

  1. Date: 3/23/2014 4:43:00 PM
    Soup mail.

  1. Date: 3/23/2014 4:42:00 PM
    Ok ... then, I'm going to Fav it again. Wait a minute ... what did you say? Who's getting old? : D

  1. Date: 3/23/2014 10:22:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win, Craig! Am I getting old or you re-posted this poem. I'm pretty sure I wrote a comment on this one ... I think that I even Fav it. Did you remove the first version?

    cornish Avatar craig cornish
    Date: 3/23/2014 11:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    All three are true dear Ruben, old, repost, and fav---but it's here for good not--Thanks! Mail
  1. Date: 3/23/2014 8:36:00 AM
    very good and great style xx

  1. Date: 3/22/2014 9:57:00 PM
    Very clever creation, Congrats on the fine win, craig

  1. Date: 3/22/2014 7:58:00 PM
    This is magnificent Craig... Super win and congratulations once again... Verlena

  1. Date: 3/22/2014 7:46:00 PM
    It sure deserves more than 1 read & win. Congrad's on your win Light & Love

  1. Date: 5/10/2013 6:16:00 PM
    Wow what a creation ..nice one Craig!Congrad's on your writing winning. Light & Love

  1. Date: 5/10/2013 3:01:00 PM
    Congratulation Craig on your win. A very clever poem and the pattern used. Connie

  1. Date: 5/10/2013 2:18:00 PM
    A masterpiece of art and eloquence. Congratulations on your well-deserved placement with this entry, Craig. I'm seriously impressed. Licia

  1. Date: 5/10/2013 1:34:00 PM
    A very impressive write Craig> Congrats on your win.