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My goddess let me down

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My goddess let me down

My goddess let me down.

My Goddess grew there in the yard
She looked so wonderful
She grew a bloody foot a day
Without no qualms at all
I got me quite excited by
The way my lady grew
Oh she was green and beautiful
She looked so lush and true.

I’d walk around my little yard
And then I’d stand with her
With love all wrote within my heart
My eyes a kind of blur
As thought of all the fun I’d have
Getting high most every day
Oh it would last for quite a while
I was chuffed in every way

But then One day I did find out
Something that made me cry
My dope plant was a ruddy male
No buds to get me high
Oh, how the shock grabbed hold of me
Well I was down for days
My goddess, she had balls on her
Then I tossed my tears away

So I grabbed me all those leaves
That grew upon this shrub
And shoved them in a great big pot
For cookies I just love
No smoke to clog me blooming lungs
Yet still the same old high`
And me, I’m quite adaptable
I am that type of guy

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  1. Date: 3/7/2014 4:19:00 PM
    Hi Peter, Loved this. Talk about laugh, the seat was rocking. What does one say, well one has to stop laughing first. I Love it, and the end, I can't write anything for laughing. You do create some of the most fun writes. Well, you finally got your high Peter. I LOved the title, totally fooled me, I have to admit. I always know where to come if i want to be inspired or just have a laugh. You always have something there to fit the mood Peter. You have a good day. Your Friend always....MIKE.

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 3/7/2014 4:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Michael. I had forgotten I wrote this one, my friend. It was a bit naughty of me, but if it mad you laugh hen I was will wrote. I have smoked that waccy weed on and off for forty years, Hey, and guess what I am alive, and very healthy. Our premier tells us it is the most dangerous drug in the world lol. I wonder how I am older than him, but look a hundred per cent fitter. Have to stop smoking Ha Ha. I appreciate your kind omments, my friend....Pee
  1. Date: 12/23/2013 1:13:00 PM
    Wow creative to call yor plant a goddess. Dis was a jaunty entertainin poem. Real fun to read u again sir. What does yer garden grow? I tink i shud grow a prince eh.

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 12/23/2013 3:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Sanyub, great to see you on my pages again. This was just a fun poem, but it was written in the nineties When I enjoyed the wacky baccy. Thanks for your comments my friend, and a meyChristmas to you and yours...peter
  1. Date: 12/22/2013 9:42:00 PM
    Good write made me smile.- eddie

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 12/23/2013 3:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Edward, a smile is worth a million dollars, and laughter even more. I appreciate your comments, my friend. You and yours have a wonderful Christmas. Peter