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My Dream Fragments

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My Dream Fragments

The window latch, sleep opens,
Then my mind flits out,
And roams the regions,
Boundless, free, and twilit,
Till warm rays kiss the night welt.

As the elephants chase,
The mind darts like a rat,
Along the shrubs ;
Soon my legs lose quick paces;
And the mind returns to the body.

The mind lands slowly in the school,
Where my boyhood had loitered,
And sees the blackened eyebrows and
The charming side long looks;
But all are broken, opening the eyes.

My dad hails, but his words break
And scatter,long away from my ears.
To catch the solace,stolen by demise
The mind flies behind in the sky,
But falls upon the body by dawn.

The mind prances:
The moonlet falls ,its stem broken,
And the stars collide into pieces;
All vanish in sweat in a flash,
And I drink water from the fear fall.

A few dreams die
With its fossils deposited
On the inner sands;
While others vanish
Like the rainbows.


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  1. Date: 12/9/2011 7:37:00 AM
    Loved it the first time around and now in this contest too!!Congrats on your win in th Dream a little dream contest!!!! luv Michael

  1. Date: 12/9/2011 5:52:00 AM
    Congratulations on your great win in Tracie's "Dream" contest Fab. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/9/2011 2:26:00 AM
    I love the twisting and turnings Congratulations on your win

  1. Date: 12/9/2011 12:12:00 AM
    Congrats on your 4th place win in my contest Fab..its a lovely dream filled poem xx

  1. Date: 12/8/2011 10:51:00 PM
    A very enjoyable write Fabiyas. Congratulations

  1. Date: 11/11/2011 11:32:00 AM
    The window latch sleep opens..The window latch, sleep opens. [is more understandable] [In the school ..not ON the school] So far I like this one best..sounds like you are astral projecting ;) Light & Love

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    Date: 11/11/2011 8:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Debbie for close reading.I have done it.
  1. Date: 9/6/2011 7:56:00 AM
    Congratulations on your placement Fabiyas. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/3/2011 9:53:00 AM
    congratulations, first winner... nice writing :)

  1. Date: 9/3/2011 3:45:00 AM
    hey Fabiyas congrats on a really superb win.. David

  1. Date: 9/3/2011 2:58:00 AM
    A First Place Win Congratulations. CR

  1. Date: 9/3/2011 12:05:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win Fabiyas

  1. Date: 9/2/2011 10:27:00 PM
    Big congratulations to you on a top place, Fabiyas. Quite impressive!!

  1. Date: 9/2/2011 10:24:00 PM
    wow~~~CONGRATULATIONS for this wonderful expressive and impressive win~~~*-* smile~~~~*~jun-jun

  1. Date: 9/2/2011 7:14:00 PM
    Congrats for 1st place in my contest with this amazing piece of poetry....Michael

  1. Date: 9/2/2011 7:01:00 PM
    Congrats FABIYAS on your first place win with this dynamic entry so profound and expressive my friend.. super well deserved luv..

  1. Date: 11/6/2010 5:00:00 AM
    Beautiful,a gem!

  1. Date: 10/29/2010 11:05:00 AM
    I am stopping in today to thank you for all your wonderful comments Fabiyas. May your weekend be one of much joy to you and may it bring inspiration to the end of your pen. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/24/2010 7:50:00 AM
    very imaginative write! i enjoyed that

  1. Date: 10/24/2010 7:36:00 AM
    Interesting writing this Sunday morning my dear... so enjoyed