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Moving Across

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Moving Across

Please me life, I love your crazed transience
I am not following rules that don’t serve me
I walk alone, I am solo in my essence
I raised myself feeding vultures of destiny

Insanity, whispers this endless night
Won’t you stand by me and dance this out? 
I have walked hard, to find myself on edges
Borders you didn’t draw, then who was it? 

Phantoms, dance me into your vapor circles
Show me we fight together, show me your form
I am chained by your absence, I slowly disappear
Don’t let me go till you want me back again

I see Time hesitant, absent from her usual haunts
And I am that she never can complete
I exist in promises drawn on disappearing roads
Hidden beyond life, where secrets turn wise...

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  1. Date: 12/26/2014 5:42:00 AM
    Such a wonderful and profound Poem Bindu. and so moving...Happy festive season to you and your family,

  1. Date: 9/21/2014 4:26:00 PM
    this i feel a deep moving very beautifully painted bindu truly excellent pen

  1. Date: 4/9/2014 5:34:00 PM
    what a great line: I exist in promises drawn on disappearing odds. gosh, I feel like that so much sometimes. great ending on this deep poetry.

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    Date: 4/10/2014 3:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Andrea:)
  1. Date: 9/30/2013 9:01:00 AM
    So moving and convoluted yet expressed with clarity.

  1. Date: 9/30/2013 7:50:00 AM
    Insanely massive & articulate imagery. "I raised myself feeding vultures of destiny", yup...I did too. Stunning work.

  1. Date: 9/30/2013 5:54:00 AM
    Very deep imagery that evokes powerful images upon the mind. Well conceived!