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Moon's Song

I race sunsets, I wear out sunbeams
 I am the madness inside of every desire
 I tiptoe in motes that hold distant promises
 Tossing little secrets to winds of change

 I harness the sun away from his days, 
 His evenings bound to my silver mane
 Dusks churn out from our brilliance together
 And then I dance in, queen of your nights

 I haze your mind under my lunar gaze
 And draw you out of your languid life
 I sweep out wishes and pour them into days
 And have the sun catch them, to bring them alive

 I am the goddess of tides and waves
 Your allegiance to me is bound by the forces
 The Sun and Earth birthed you into this world
 But it was me you were destined, to find your dreams…

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  1. Date: 4/13/2015 10:32:00 AM
    This is a hauntingly beautiful poem that poetically draws on the allure of the moon within our dreams and fantasies. Emile. #7

  1. Date: 5/10/2014 8:19:00 PM
    I wrote this for what you call my tribal gypsies series, I'm part native american, and my son Patrick said I always write sad or depressing stuff for my tribal side so I did this to prove him wrong! I enjoyed doing something new and this seemed the right road to take my wagon down, but on the gypsies side I'm out of ideas now, lol cheri glad you enjoyed it my friend take care and I'm so glad your back. cheri

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan
    Date: 5/11/2014 7:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Your gypsy series are awesome, dear lady!!
  1. Date: 5/10/2014 8:13:00 PM
    Nights lunar glow shines upon this luckest of stars hanging above this man of yours, he is shackled by the desires that you entice him with, and is a wanton prisoner to you his nights enchantress. Sorry sometimes I rattle on but this is a great work that I did enjoy totally, great job bravo again my dearest friend. cheri

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan
    Date: 5/11/2014 7:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I absolutely love this comment, thank you:)
  1. Date: 3/17/2014 2:38:00 PM
    I decided to go back to your first posted poem to see where it all began... It began quite well to say the least...I am totally enchanted by this poem - Tim

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan
    Date: 3/20/2014 4:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, dear Tim!! I am glad you liked this poem, it is special to me as well! hugs!
  1. Date: 1/17/2014 6:10:00 PM
    splendid poem Bindu love it Shadow x smile hug

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan
    Date: 1/20/2014 9:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Shadow, I am glad you enjoyed this poem:) hugs.
  1. Date: 1/13/2014 12:45:00 AM
    Wonderful work i am enchanted by the lines you've written, it's majestic with a romantic flavor you've always come through with it's a great work you be very proud of it. don't change anything here leave it alone. this write can stand on it's own without any changes at all. cheri

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan
    Date: 1/14/2014 4:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Cheri, I am so glad you liked this poem. This is one of my fav too:)
  1. Date: 10/29/2013 8:45:00 AM
    I enjoyed this one even more the second time. I would change the form to personification.

  1. Date: 10/10/2013 12:53:00 PM
    Excellent use of metaphors and imagery...thoroughly enjoyed this write! Julie :-)

  1. Date: 10/9/2013 10:02:00 AM
    Your poetry is such a gift !! You are a very special poet.......I love this beauty!

  1. Date: 10/6/2013 8:23:00 PM
    Awesome read. Excellently crafted.

  1. Date: 10/6/2013 3:37:00 PM
    Can t get more deep and beautiful than this..I have so many friends i have to visit here but i ll definitely be back to read more of yours in the coming days.You are an amazing poetess..I mean it dear.

  1. Date: 10/5/2013 8:05:00 PM
    I love the way you put the moon on a pedestal, beautiful images come to mind Bindu, loved your poem xxx

  1. Date: 10/5/2013 3:45:00 PM
    This is exactly what the moon would sing!!!! Just beautiful...

  1. Date: 10/5/2013 2:20:00 PM
    sweet melody filled with celestial delight, bindu... i like your kind of univerese; ink on!..:) hugggs

  1. Date: 10/5/2013 9:11:00 AM
    You speak in beauteous tones!