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Moon and Sun

Although we meet the dying day Our sun ensconced in melting blue The moon’s held high to swing and sway Her light may sprinkle, softest hue No other reason but for you There’s a time when all stars must go When the sky can hold only two And that is when my love will grow. One night, the whitest white will stray Snowflakes sticking to dying rue The sun may flash its final ray But after that, the golden’s through And once again the night is new We’ll let the winters beauty show The fireplace our burning cue And that is when my love will grow. There is a time in early May When flowers bloom and spring is new Then laughter shakes as children play Shrieking with fun that’s over-due Who could cry today, guess a few. . . I’ve felt the sunshine’s warmest glow One day I’ll feel your warmest, too And that is when my love will grow. When sunshine fades, moon glows anew; And when she dips once more, he’ll go And when they’re in the sky, just two- And that is when my love will grow.

Copyright © Dana Smith

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  1. Date: 6/14/2013 4:40:00 PM
    creative and enchanting. very pleasant read.... I felt the emotion with which you wrote this beautiful poem. You are a very talented lady... Jake

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 11:11:00 AM
    good job nice poem that just made my love grow to write more poetry

  1. Date: 3/21/2013 8:59:00 PM
    Wow, I haven't visited in a while. This is such a wonderful poem. I hope your visits will frequent. I really like lunar imagery, well all night imagery, but especially moon imagery.. Great Work.

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 4:39:00 PM
    Ahh!! Enjoyed reading your very expressive and creative work..Sara

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 9:24:00 PM
    That was awesome and touching honey. I love the beautiful line..."When sunshine fades, moon glows anew;

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 10:28:00 AM
    So beautiful! Great job.

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 2:50:00 PM
    A very nice and lovely poem... it glows like a gem... ... always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 5:34:00 PM
    This is immensely beautiful Dana'lynn! I really enjoyed reading this amazing poem this evening! What a immaculate piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 5:17:00 PM