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Money And Fair Words

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Money And Fair Words

With money and fair words he won her heart
With a flashy proposal promised they would not part

At the wedding the words I do he could not say
For in his heart he knew her love he would betray

So he ran from the altar and out the church door
Why he had done this no one was sure

Only he knew as he fled to his bit on the side
The poor bride collapsed and just cried and cried 

For he ran to be happy but it will not last 
For with women’s hearts he plays loose and fast

Her mother and father were shocked to the core
As they picked up their daughter off the church floor

Drying her tears they tried to explain
That one day she would love and overcome this pain

As for the girl she’s not trusted men for a while
Maybe one day a man will make her trust and smile

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  1. Date: 6/20/2013 5:07:00 PM
    You have a unique way of writing poetry and I love it. Thanks for sharing..... lucilla

  1. Date: 6/20/2013 7:50:00 AM
    Enjoyed reading this one..That would be sad but better for the woman in the long run..Trust is a thing easily broken and hard to repair..Sara

  1. Date: 6/20/2013 2:12:00 AM
    Nice to see you back, friend. Enjoyed this sensitive poem much!! Jag

  1. Date: 6/20/2013 12:52:00 AM
    The poor girl, Owen. She is better off without him. Great one always! Have a great day starting with your morning coffee :).

  1. Date: 6/20/2013 12:28:00 AM
    Poor maiden....I'm sure one day she will smile. :o) Nice to see you again Owen!

  1. Date: 6/19/2013 9:01:00 AM
    Oh my, a bad experience for everyone. It's traumatic to lose trust of the one who is supposed to love you. Great expression of betrayal... :)

  1. Date: 6/18/2013 7:36:00 AM
    How sad and tragic. Phew... glad I didn't have this experience 28 years ago! Clever and tongue in cheek write.

  1. Date: 6/18/2013 1:05:00 AM
    this one shows your sensitive side, owen!! I enjoyed the read.

  1. Date: 6/17/2013 1:01:00 PM
    This is very sad, it reminds me of the movie with Julia Roberts "The Runaways Bride" She loved her sneakers, poor saps, anyway good to have you back my friend, I missed you xxx v xxx