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Missed it by-THAT-much

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Missed it by-THAT-much

Missed it by *that*much

'Missed it by *that*much'
is what I am told when I  'run '
*Barry Bones and *Karma Lee
the fastest of legs ,with my fingers.
I run, I swipe ,I slide,I somersault
still 'nom nom leathery', the sharp toothed monsters
eat my bones as a tasty treat.
No idol I  do get,my running reflexes
chased away by demonic monkeys.
A feeble under 50 meters and skinny 9 points
hoard as the score my  sweat earns...
I say, I quit ,to my ten year old
and sneak back to the tab track
when she' s not around.
Insult to injury ,she pokes at my scary scores
mmphh, I really quit ....
(till she snuggles deep in her bed-..s shh)

...and this  is how I ''Temple Run',for all I know,
in my daughter's virtual run track!!


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**I refer to playing Temple Run ,a  virtual adventure game ,for winning an idol from a  temple .             *  Barry Bones, and* Karma Lee, are  fast running explorers. ..Demons chase the explorers  who get inside the temple,so you have to run real fast. I run like a kid myself..Enjoy.. 



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  1. Date: 2/7/2013 3:44:00 AM
    wow one can get caught up in your adventure, Mehnaz, that is how good your poetry is....

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 3:23:00 PM
    Sounds like fun!

  1. Date: 2/3/2013 3:50:00 AM
    Wonderful poem!

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 2/3/2013 11:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Vesna...
  1. Date: 2/2/2013 12:31:00 PM
    hey where was this awesome poem when the video game poetry contest was going on. It would have placed for sure!! well, when I was young, i was fastest runner in my class. Those were many years ago!!! (before internet games too so I used my own legs. haha)

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 2/2/2013 1:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hehe, am always late...and a lousy runner....thanks Andrea..
  1. Date: 2/2/2013 11:54:00 AM
    A fun write Mehnaz, enjoyed xxx

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 2/2/2013 1:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Rose...