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Mine now lonely

I remember
the rush
the flush;

her tresses ‘pon mine flesh
were floating
softly caressing, 
as her whisper in mine ear

as I muse
of those memories 
in mine now lonely,
this pen I hold dear
‘pon mine slip

as did she
above I
on those long and loving
summer nights  

I surly missed all my friends here,
much love to you all poets !

Copyright © James Peranteau

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  1. Date: 4/28/2012 11:54:00 AM
    James I have thought about you and Vince for most of this week and out of the blue here you are with a note. I hope all is well with you and Noah. It has been very hectic at the moment. I babysit my grandson and travel 6 hours a week and am away from home 3 days a week. It has limited my time on the soup. The other two days Mon and Fri I work at my son's shop helping him out. So that leaves Sat and Sun. to catch up with things. love phyl

  1. Date: 4/21/2012 5:26:00 PM
    hello James my friend.. just want to let u know I am leaving PS .. like so many others haver become disgustred with Admns.. and their lack of value for their members.. time to move along to next level luv.. may pop in now and aain but not oftren.. hope u will stay poetic and enjoy new home with Noah.. all my luv..

  1. Date: 4/16/2012 9:15:00 AM
    Wonderful that you are in your new house and all the cleaning done. Welcome back. Have been having usual eye problems and so cannot spend much time at the laptop. Love, daver

  1. Date: 4/16/2012 8:14:00 AM
    good to hear from you JP.....I know life is aligned when your comments visit my work.....God Bless you and Noah, keep the poems flowin'.....jimbo

  1. Date: 4/12/2012 12:35:00 PM
    Smile ..... Very loving poem. - Hello from Norway. - oxox Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 4/11/2012 7:43:00 PM
    Great piece, James! Very nice! How are you, my friend? And Noah? I hope everything is fine. My best wishes. Ruben.

  1. Date: 4/11/2012 5:27:00 PM
    Excellent poem--enjoyed every bit of it! Ello! (: Always, Laura

  1. Date: 4/11/2012 9:02:00 AM
    Very romantic with a sense of sweet nostalgia James.. Glad you are back here to write.. Hope little Noah is fine..:)

  1. Date: 4/11/2012 8:52:00 AM
    Welcome back, Sir James. This one is up to your usual high standard. "Her tresses 'pon my flesh." Scorch! My pace maker just went crazy. Fortunately it still has a year to go. Love, daver

  1. Date: 4/10/2012 10:15:00 PM
    James, a very sad thought... I don't like any kind of lonely feeling,, It's one thing to be alone, and another to be alone and longing for that certain someone ... Glad to see you again.. Thank you,,, always..PD

  1. Date: 4/10/2012 2:35:00 PM
    Good one honoring soupers..Enjoyed reading since I am one of those soupers..Sara

  1. Date: 4/10/2012 9:05:00 AM
    words to embrace James.. words of passion with fond memories and mementos alike..lkuv.. u have so been on my mind lately .. congrats on new home for u and Noah.. a big step .. a huge achievement.. enjoy luv... we will be leaving Italy in May for home in New Jersey.. we bought new in October last year.. so happy u let me know luv..

  1. Date: 4/10/2012 3:48:00 AM
    whoohoo, james... you were missed by moi... love this dandy poesy... so stay more, okay?.. come visit my page again.. thanks, friend!!..:) hugggs!

  1. Date: 4/9/2012 10:57:00 PM
    Hey, you are back. YAYYYYY. So nice to see you back and this is a lovely poem!

  1. Date: 4/9/2012 7:29:00 PM
    I have sure missed you too James, wondered what happened to you but see you have posted one of your superb itchy writes to bring me up to speed. Hope you are ok and back with us. Luv, Lizzie

  1. Date: 4/9/2012 6:23:00 PM
    Hello my dear friends ! Well, dear poets, since February, I have been renovating Noah and my house and moving in. Wowzers ! After this journey, I'm pretty certain that Noah and I will be spending many years in this house ! *smiles* I'm getting too old for this ! I missed you all ! Enjoy my friends ! Have a wonderful week ! Much love, james