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Below is the poem entitled MIND'S WIDESCREEN which was written by poet nette onclaud. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Framed moments zoom, a night of sweet review Where parts of life appear on mind’s widescreen A peachy girl screams out for lollipop Third birthday flops, escaping from the clown Yet later on, a fan of circus rides. On print, feet wade among the giant oaks Tiptoeing on grass as owl voices tweet To hush when million diamond stars wink; The moon, so round, becomes a ritual Of sky-gazing etched on oil paintings brushed. Corsage torn, pinned by teenage reveries Jut out from teenage fingers' girding dance, A corner made for openings of love. Now stop and stare; air tickets from the bends Wayfarer hunting for exotic lands Alongside photos of family romps; The old to match the new of many dreams. Blank traces run along a filmy edge Sequels of voyages yet to be born And fresco-like, the blend of spirit-fire. Collage Held Dear Contest 11/7/13

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  1. Date: 11/9/2013 3:22:00 PM
    Lovely imagery, Nette. Best wishes in the contest! Many thanks for your visits to my poems :)

  1. Date: 11/9/2013 12:11:00 AM
    great imagery in the wanderings of the mind here babe..

  1. Date: 11/8/2013 12:31:00 PM
    I so enjoyed this piece, I expect to see it on the winners list.

  1. Date: 11/8/2013 8:34:00 AM
    An excellent masterpiece of a great artist! i love it in every way! Kudos again my dear friend Nette! A winner for sure! Thanks for sharing! By the way, thanks a lot for another text yesterday. I've read it when I arrived home 'cuz I didn't bring my cp @ school. Thanks also for your inspiring comments on my trial ghazal poem. I'm not sure if it's ok. How's the weather there now? Hope no more typhoon 'cuz my aunt will be buried tom. Ok, have a nice day & biggest hugs to u! love lots, Leonora

  1. Date: 11/8/2013 6:54:00 AM
    As always, I have to wonder where you store these beautiful phrases to entertain us with. Have I told you before you're eloquent? I know (lol). I'm telling you again now. Good luck in the contest with this smoothie, my friend. Licia :-)

  1. Date: 11/7/2013 8:35:00 PM
    I bow to the greatest artist I've read in a long time, you my wonderful friend are a masterful poet! This poem is a masterpiece of yours Nette! What a supreme piece, quite the magnificent poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 11/7/2013 5:19:00 PM
    Interesting lines penned..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

  1. Date: 11/7/2013 1:34:00 PM
    You are an artistic poetess having beautiful colors on your golden palette adorned an excellent picture on the mind's widescreen sequencing the teenager's time. Lovely done, my lovely friend. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 11/7/2013 11:25:00 AM
    - Beautiful thoughts are allocated from you in a magnificent poem Nette ! - :))) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/7/2013 10:25:00 AM
    Every line an artist's masterpiece Nette....I can live in your words

  1. Date: 11/7/2013 10:12:00 AM
    This one circles round , flits and smokes. Love the last lines. I used to write down my dreams in the morning. Came up with some pretty amazing conclusions. You are so talented. Love, daver

  1. Date: 11/7/2013 10:04:00 AM
    Snippets of memoirs tucked in the deep pool of your heart. The blank traces, god, I did not see that coming!Please don't make me faint.You are a star. Many thanks!

  1. Date: 11/7/2013 9:08:00 AM
    Insanely strong images & gripping atmosphere. Damn, you do it so well. :)

  1. Date: 11/7/2013 8:45:00 AM
    a beautifully penned vision excellent piece