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Midnight...You Are My Sun

In all the earnest buds
                  that long to open…..
and ambrosial May promises

I tried in the silence
and the rush of the storm
that rages wild and unkempt
to fight this consuming
                        To cease the feeling….
To halt the sticky sweetness
(berries on your lips)

I can’t stop it…baby
It’s there in every hour
In the breaking of the dawn
painted pink and washed in fire

In the turbulent waves of blue
and salt rain on my face
In the way you speak 
                           and caress me
and the way your eyes just mess me

In the stark speech of branches
and the reawakening of flowers
The breeze that teases my hair
and tosses it carelessly

It’s just always there
stroking and breaking
                   and rebuilding me
Crashing me to jagged rocks
and yet spreading my wings
to fly your passion sky

In the dream of something
came the reality of you

In the fantasy of a wind’s embrace
                came your precious face
and now I am powerless….
just helpless to stop this

My exposed heart blasts out
this eternal hankering……
this infinite crimson crush

A war against the pitching
A battle against this tumble
A railing combat…yet….

Aye! In the night that steals the sun
In the clouds that whisper achromatic hues
and the freesia and lilacs 
                     and violets….. I see you
You are there just waiting
Always……relentlessly….I fall

Oh baby, I just can’t stop this

I fall, hard in a breathless fumble
Into your waiting heart

Like a trembling cat
I curl in your lap
I am so in love with you…

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  1. Date: 3/18/2009 3:44:00 PM
    Very vivid images and powerful emotion. Great work, Christie!!

  1. Date: 3/13/2009 12:49:00 AM
    Love the play on words in your title in this one Christie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

  1. Date: 3/12/2009 11:20:00 AM
    A great painter with the delicate brush of words cannot a more complete landscape of emotions paint.

  1. Date: 3/12/2009 11:00:00 AM
    .... dangerous stunning petals kill me continually..... Check your soup mail : )

  1. Date: 3/12/2009 8:53:00 AM
    Hello my sweet kindred friend *^_^* this is just beautiful, full of rich emotion & an outpouring of tender love, the imagery is just amazing. AND I love the title! My favorite: "In the dream of something came the reality of you" stunning. :) Yes they grow so quickly & only chocolate will console. HA You bet... they leave...we'll cry & eat chocolate. Well, I'll bring sugar-free for me. hahaa They're calling for snow how d.e.p.r.e.s.s.i.n.g~! Love, your lioness friend toting her emergency shell

  1. Date: 3/11/2009 3:14:00 PM
    Lively, true to heart, colorful, desirous, leaving one, wanting- I love the way it stumbles along, as much the way ones heart-light does! And Thank-you Christie, your comments, mean much, are much enjoyed, and appreciated- Love, poet butterfly

  1. Date: 3/11/2009 8:19:00 AM
    Careful, Christie, you're gonna melt the object of your affection. If I were he I would be on my motorcycle racing toward your abode. Passionate! Love, daver

  1. Date: 3/11/2009 6:42:00 AM
    Ps. Oh, and, "Love Always To 'You & Brianna, John!!!!":):) Smile~Now on we go....

  1. Date: 3/11/2009 6:40:00 AM
    ....and since over the course of but a short while, "Your Heart" has come to mean very much unto myself!!!!~i am sincerely hoping, that whomever this possible love may or may not be!? May become the joy and the fulfilling of "Your Loves Heart!!!?"~For within my view, "You Deserve Such As This!!!!"~"Beautiful Write Christie~Laced With Love!!!!"~And of course, as usual, many wonderful images and thoughts!!!:):) On we go....

  1. Date: 3/11/2009 6:32:00 AM
    Smile~this has a familiar ring unto its beginning verses? And of course it holds "Your Beautiful & Tender Heart & Souls Unique Touch!!!!"~" Good Morning Precious & Gifted Christie Moses & Your Little Tinkerbell Brianna!!!"~I hope that You are Both doing wonderfully dear; and have been!!!?~I am trying to digest this write here? Smile~ And I am seeing a love for someone, whom seems very dear unto "Your Priceless Heart!!!?"....cont....

  1. Date: 3/11/2009 1:34:00 AM
    ...had to stop by and read this incredible poem once again.... I'll be late, but who cares.... I'll be swimming in these lines for the rest of the day... LOL... you are truly a wonderful person Christie and a genius poet..... love Col

  1. Date: 3/11/2009 1:31:00 AM
    Wonderful work as these comments below show Christie.I echo them.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

  1. Date: 3/11/2009 1:24:00 AM
    lovely write there... so many beautiful lines i'd love to quote but there's just so many! love the title!! ~ Arany

  1. Date: 3/10/2009 4:56:00 PM
    "In the dream of something came the reality of you". Nice lines in this amzing poem...Raul

  1. Date: 3/10/2009 4:35:00 PM
    Such passion, depth, and beauty in your lines. The title takes my breath away!! I don't know where that came from, but it's so perfect! "I fall hard in a breathless fumble into your waiting heart"...that is just so intense. Love, Sara:)

  1. Date: 3/10/2009 3:58:00 PM
    Christie this poem is beautiful from start to finish you have out done yourself. This is the best poem I have read in awhile..truly... the last stanza ties it together perfectly. This is one for my journal of poems never to be lost. Sending you warmth from CA

  1. Date: 3/10/2009 3:02:00 PM
    A breath taking piece of poetry at its best, the way you liken love to nature, the colour, the "crashing to jagged rocks", "winds embrace", passion sky, the endless metaphors. Powerful writing. Thanks for your encouraging comments to me. Regards: You can be proud of this piece Déirdre

  1. Date: 3/10/2009 12:34:00 PM
    You are out of control in love. Such beauty in every line of unbearable passion. You let the reader know you promise your love will be strong, real and beyond any love HE has ever known. Inspiration runs deep and it shows in all your amazing poetry, once again. Love, Shar

  1. Date: 3/10/2009 10:59:00 AM
    Any man would be lucky to receive this opening of heart and soul; to be that lap...I want this for you, and pray you get it dear, someday if not today...:) love, Kristin this is beautifully written, hun, beautiful

  1. Date: 3/10/2009 10:43:00 AM
    Christie...will the rest of your poems get jealous if I say this is the best one?'s my favorite anyway. "In the dream of something came the reality of you" I love it, I love It!! You are talented girly! Know that!! Love, Steve